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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next I'm definetly looking forward to it,please update soon.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So deliciously steamy! I can't wait for you to get to the chap with the sex toys--please update soon!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! More, more, more!!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh yeah, be inuyasha's good little girl & keep writing, my mouth is watering and my groins are tight just from reading this heated fic!! Wooo hoo!!!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that's an interesting title just so you know. i like the story so far so update soon. make the chapters longer alright thats all i wanna say. take care and have fun.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh... fix some of your mistake but... please don't worry about if you should finish it or not... add more, and do as much as your heart desires.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ps, i wouldn't mind that happening to me if i were Kagome... Kinda wish it would.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH HELLA YAH I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE!!! please...
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good! All I would recommend is to fix some grammatical errors, and perhaps get a beta to help you out a little. Other than that your fanfic is good. keep up the great work!