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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww hey!! Don't hold back on me now! I'm dieing to relea..... lol I mean read more!! Yeah thats it! ~_o: Good job/Good girl!!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DEF like it... more more giv me moooree
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man!!! What a cliff hanger. *sniffes* Please finish up the fun. Found a few spelling mistakes but no big. The romance along with the details were great. Keep it up!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol
it's a bit, weird... but everyone has their own style of writing their 'erotica' scenes. I know i do. lol
it's a bit, weird... but everyone has their own style of writing their 'erotica' scenes. I know i do. lol
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. You gotta continue or I'll cry. Okay, I won't cry but I'll be really sad. Continue!!! I'll be waiting.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You stoped it there. You had me gripped in the story. Please continue.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue please,I really wanna see whaty happens next.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! i think you should keep on with the story it's great so far!:)
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yoou got niiine!!! addd!!!!!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u will update this one, i don't want to go over to desperate masures. lol