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for My Life is My Pain

by BlackPhoenix

person Fouloldron
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You really should put a warning on this saying Rape and Child Abuse, because Minor and Violence don't really cover that.
person Vyper
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is good and sad. It reminds me of my abuse as a kid. I can relate to it in many ways and I hope that Inuyasha is able to help Sesshoumaru. My little sister helped me by telling although I don't know if that will help Sess and considering this is an adult story about Sess with Inu then it isn't like my experience there since I would rather dunk my head in boiling oil battered and fried than do anything remotely insestual with my family members. Still good story.
person Henako
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delectable
I find it interesting how you melded the oddities of time together so seemlessly. IE: Naraku in cave, Inu no Taisho alive etc etc
I've never actually read any fic that had any Papa/Pup in it and was Quite surprised on how I both liked and disliked the portrayal of the father. He appeared to be both ruthless, protective, and jealous all at once.
Aside from some minor grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, this is a very good story.
I cannot wait for the next (8th) chapter in what promises to be a very intimidating story
Faithfully,
~Harlequin, Masked Deciever
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, seems interesting so far. I can't wait to see what Naraku does. I kinda hope that you don't do mpreg thing, that just rubs me the wrong way for some reason, but its your story, so I have no right to complain either way, update soon,kay
person TrixXx
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! A new chapter *squeals* I'm so happy. So is this gonna be a Taisho/Sess or a Inu/Sess either way this fic ROCKS! Keep it up ^_-
person ladytokyo
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow poor Sesshy. How can no one know? will Inuyasha find out and try to stop it? I like that he was sticking up for his brother. who is this new hanyou? and what trouble will it bring? update please.

ladytokyo
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice
person TrixXx
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LUV this fic soooo much. Poor sesshy-chan -_- please continue ^-^
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good, i look forward to how this story will go. please update soon.
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do think Sesshy is a bit ooc but I also think that this story kinda goes with what I think. Ok, forgive me I over analyze things-- but I do believe in order to become some a cold individual, Sesshomaru has had to endure some pain at some point and Inu noTashio or however its spelled is no angel.

I love the story and hope to see more soon!