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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good story but I wish it were longer.
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should really try to continue the story.....you have done a fantastic job so far, such great detail. It made me feel as if i was part of the story and that is what makes for a great storyline....please considering updating soon
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THAT WAS HOT!!!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um...yeah, it posted before I wanted it to...hehe...*shruggs shoulders*
SO!
Yeah, this is a great story, nice description, great incharacter sort of stuff, loved the danceing scene, and the, 'turn around, then look down' part, twas hallarious!
If you are going to continue it, because you said that it was a one shot, but if you doo continue it, I would very appresiate it! It was a teriface story!!!
TTYL;
megan
SO!
Yeah, this is a great story, nice description, great incharacter sort of stuff, loved the danceing scene, and the, 'turn around, then look down' part, twas hallarious!
If you are going to continue it, because you said that it was a one shot, but if you doo continue it, I would very appresiate it! It was a teriface story!!!
TTYL;
megan
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it please keep it going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is real good and can not wait for more of the story and i love the way sessum is nice and in love with kegoma. can not wait for more of the story.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, that is a side of Sesshomaru I never thought about before (fascination for humans I mean) i'm confused about the mobile, how does it work w/o a signal? Other than that your very talented (and of course your beta too!) Are you planning too write more? ; ) Hope so!! YAY for Shakira!!! Her songs "Animal City" and "Hips Don't Lie" are my favs! : ) I like "La Tortura" too, but I don't have her other song on my cdthat was in your story : (
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, that is a side of Sesshomaru I never thought about before (fascination for humans I mean) i'm confused about the mobile, how does it work w/o a signal? Other than that your very talented (and of course your beta too!) Are you planning too write more? ; ) Hope so!! YAY for Shakira!!! Her songs "Animal City" and "Hips Don't Lie" are my favs! : ) I like "La Tortura" too, but I don't have her other song on my cdthat was in your story : (