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for Motto Suteki Na Asa Ga Kuru Yo

by frivera

schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interesting. You should really update. I like it so far.
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue writting?
person szaugg
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well this is just really interesting. I'm cracking up imaging jaken's annoying whining with the new body, LOL.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that Sesshomaru's mother wants him to mate with Jaken, since so many of the stories make her out to be almost nazi-like about pure inu blood. I also loved the line with Sesshomaru thinking he might do something he'd regret, then adding at the end, which he should stop doing. Love it. Great line. Can't wait until you update.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be honest...I was afraid to read this at first b/c well the idea is nasty to me. Now that I read the first two chapters, I'm okay with it. I hope that you continue.
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cute so far-hurry and update!!
person yako
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw, that's sweet^^ Jaken is a cutie now, but he's still the Jaken we all know and that's the best part - cute new body but the same old temperXD I'm curious about Shesshoumaru and his thoughts on this makeoverXD And of course i wanna see some hot smutty action going onXD
Nice story, really^^ Keep going!
person nomdeplume
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious how this turns out. Please continue.