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June 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!
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September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon please.
schedule
March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it but i hate it when people leave cliff hangers cause then i have to wait till the next chapter
hope you update soon and good luck in school
hope you update soon and good luck in school
schedule
January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rins wants? RINS WANTS?!? WE WANTS!! We want more! UPDATE SOON!~ B reading U!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your story was pretty okay but it would be 100% better with good grammar because during reading it I got the feeling I was reading something a middle schooler wrote.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I think that you have really really bad grammer.. Its YOU not u .. This isnt some IM box .. or letter you write to your friend. This is a serious board where some people take writing Seriously
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooooooooooooh
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I have a few harmless critiques so don't be offended. Work a little more on your grammer and the theme at which Rin is speaking in. Over all a great start. Keep writing.
schedule
January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't.... How could you finish the chapter like that...it no fair...well one thing the beginning is really good so keep going and by the way i can wait for the next chapt!!!!