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for The Other Side of Kazaana

by szaugg

person Aimee
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dead. *Dead* *from* *joy*. I love that this, *this* is how Miroku finds out about things, and love even more that he'd already figured out parts of it and just kept it to himself. His mental ramblings on gender and experience and vulnerability had me snickering madly as he veered back and forth between talking himself out of things and talking himself *into* them. Whee!
person oniku
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Can't believe how fast you update! Always so good too, it's amazing! I'm dying to see what happens next!!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EGHADS!!! More surprises yet! The ronin took care of Naraku so now he's the ultimate villain. I really wasn't expecting that at all! Excellent update, really enjoying this storyline.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THE GODS OF HELL!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE AGAIN I'LL...I'LL...RIP YOUR SKIN OFF AND WEAR IT AS A PROM DRESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THE GODS OF HELL, IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON I'LL RIP YOUR SKIN OFF AND WEAR IT AS A PROM DRESS!!!!!!!!

Well, now that that's out of my system. I really love this story. I think that you are a very good author and am really pleased with how this is playing out.
The one chacter killing the other at the end of Chapter 14((not saying who so that if someone reads this before reading the story, it's not ruined)) It really surprised me, but I liked it. I can't wait to see what happenes next!!
person MeLaiya
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay, I can review again. Glad they stopped that bull about having to be a memeber. Anyhoo, Im still loving this as usual. Please keep up the the good work and update soon....like right now would be great....Please...
person Grey
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still another great chapter! I can't believe that he made tea and drank it in the middle of all that blood! I'm definitely worried for Miroku now.
person senbo-sama
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Buwahaha! Go evil Ronin! Not that I really like him, it's just he killed Naraku so perfectly...heheheh, evil possesiveness. xD I dunno, I'm kind of torn between liking Ronin Miroku because he's awesomely evil and not liking him because he's awesomely evil. It's like, you're cool but I don't like how you want to...completely and utterly rape Miroku. o__O Ah, anyhoo, love the story btw, I've been meaning to review. Hehe~ I forget these kind of things. Ah, you do I good job of updating (Nice!) so I won't poke you into updating. x3 Cheers!

senbo~<3
person Eerie
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the best alternate universe that I have ever read, seriously. Now we know a bit more about where the two Mirokus diverged and I have to say that I even feel a bit sorry for the Ronin. Total shock. Not as sorry as I now feel for Mirou, of course. Seriously - you? Win everything. Ever. Woo. :)
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story! I must admit though, I was a little skiddish with reading this just because usually Inu/Mir fics are not good. But I must say this takes the cake. I love how you have two different worlds. I'm thrilled to see whats going to happen next. And I also like the slowness of Inuyasha and Miroku's relationship. ^_^. Makes me happy! Well I can't wait for more.