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I'm loving this story especially Inuyasha's personity. Keep up the good work.

*hops up and down happily* Two in one day! *Two in one day*! The sun is shining, birds are singing, rainbows are... doing whatever it is they do... and Inuyasha's youkai is winning my love all over again. Miroku *is* cute, the 'show don't tell' explanation was hot as all get out, and I'm already looking forward to the penalty. *loves*

Hey,
Inuyasha is getting hotter and hotter! I've been waiting for more of this chapter and it was def. worth it. Great chapter!

I enjoyed this chapter. I'm curious what the "punishment" will be, and I'm wondering how Miroku's going to behave once the youkai is gone and he's left with InuYasha. I know Miroku hasn't really had the opportunity to really stand up to InuYasha, but if there ever was a moment, finding out he'd been claimed without his knowledge would be a good one. Glad to see you updated so quickly with all of these stories you've got going at the moment.

Sorry haven't commented until now but I have really been enjoying this story. It is mature and well written with an excellent plot.
Looking forward to reading more.

Okay, I've been reading your stories for a week or so now and have plowed my way through all of them. They are totally addictive! Your wit is marvelously understated, and the characterizations consistently delightful. I wholly adore Miroku and you generally make him wonderfully attractive. And all of that is pretty much the case in this story as well (lovin' the Ronin, BTW, truly chills-inducing kinda guy). May I confess one particular quibble, though? Miroku's diminutive stature just feels all wrong to me, especially considering how intimidating the Ronin is. I got nothin' against guy on guy, but is it necessary to emasculate one of them? Every time I see a reference to Miroku's "small" this or that I cringe a bit. Of course, it is not enough to stop me from reading and, of course, enjoying. I'm guessing I would enjoy anything you wrote...

Oh!! The moment of truth is at hand and you.... stopped??? EEEAAAGH!!
Ok, I'm through tantruming...lol Very nice introspection there, Miroku is slowly coming around. Can't wait for your next update, as usual... I gotta wonder though, what would be getting if you really DID have 'time to write' *smirk*

Oh, thank god. After that last chapter I think that I would have _snapped_ if this chapter had been anything other than the sweet, funny, gorgeous little slice that it was. Miroku's mind cracks me up and Inuyasha and Kouga, for all their height and bitter experiences, are just as _silly_ in this reality as they were in the original one. Heh.

(Does it help if _I'm_ entirely happy with how it turned out? Really, I have to block out the fact that you're apparently writing these chapters on a shoestring and without the polishing time you would prefer, because otherwise I would be reduced to just babbling at you incoherently in awe. Er, more so. ;)

More great Miroku flustering! I had to read this twice because I was laughing too hard after the first time to comment. I almost expected Miroku to want to go out and date some other guys quick in order to get the upper hand! Great chapter!

I'd wish for horrible things to befall upon you but then there probably wouldn't be an update. So I'll keep to myself. Because you know you left it at such a part that I want to scream bloody mary in pure anger. But i wont. I'll just keep to myself.

On the other hand...
The chapter was awesome! A big shocker with Miroku hearing all that stuff. I want to read more! Lol. Well job well done. Until then.