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for The Other Side of Kazaana

by szaugg

person Rawben
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! finally miroku gets his! ha! that was too funny. i'm glad he's sticking up for himself. ;) that'll make it fun. and man! i love inu's youki! he's hilarious. ;) great job... now i just have to wait for the next update... ::sigh::
person KamakuraYumi
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It took me a couple of sessions but I finally got it finished. You really do pack a lot of ideas into any one chapter but don't get me wrong, I love that. Usually I'm reading your work in smaller chapter by chapter bursts so it's not quite as intense. My final consensus: I think I've found a new addiction. I love your rather wicked Inuyasha. I have to admit the friendlier, less homicidal version of Sesshomaru threw me at first now I think he's pretty cool. That encounter with Kagura was fantastic. Add to that the double whammy of Miroku kicking Inuyasha and Kouga's butts simultaneously. Our favourite wolf prince might think twice about calling him cute next time! I have to admit the manner in which Kanna, Naraku and the baby (can't remember his name) were dispatch filled me with a certain sense of horror. Could your Ronin Miroku be truly evil? I look forward to finding out.
person Lina
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story so much I read it twice in a row and it's not even finished yet! I thought I had fallen in love when I read Uke but this one even made me cry (don't ask me why I just got emotional in some parts *_*). Anyways, the story is wonderfully writen at a good pace of development and character interaction, I just love it. All the humor, the drama, and the romance, everything is just so well done I can hardly wait for more. ^_^
person Ranuel
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I discovered this story via its nomination for IYFG and I glad I had 19 chapters to enjoy before I got to the end. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
person Deadlyhair
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Go you! And go Miroku! Given how helpess he's been for most of the series, it's easy to see how InuYasha and Koga could misjudge him, but it's great to see him let loose a little.
person dac720
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Inuyasha just had to piss him off, I mean seriously Miroku and innocence...... bawhahahahahaha *catches breath and wipes tears from eyes* I don’t think those two words should be in the same sentence. Hopefully his staff swinging display will remind everyone of his manliness and the ability to hold his own in a fight instead of dangerously advanced stages of PMS. I also loved seeing Sesshomaru let loose a little bit, would love to see more Sess/Kagura action.
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I just reviews your other story: "The Last Pure Human" (I think that is the title) and I sneak on to the site during my break and WHALA! Another chapter to read. Thanks you so much...saved me from boredom. Can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling there is going to be a lemon..an angry lemon **drool** Great chapter by the way.

<33Passing_Breeze
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I just reviews your other story: "The Last Pure Human" (I think that is the title) and I sneak on to the site during my break and WHALA! Another chapter to read. Thanks you so much...saved me from boredom. Can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling there is going to be a lemon..an angry lemon **drool** Great chapter by the way.

<33Passing_Breeze
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see this back up, and I think this chapter was a long time coming. Although I like InuYasha in this world, he needed shown that Miroku wasn't defenseless and put in his place. And I loved that his youkai was actually excited at the prospect, much to InuYasha's confusion. A great update. I'll wait as patiently as I can for more.
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot! Update, YAY! and Miroku kicking ass, even BIGGER YAY! Happy, happy...