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your stories are all so good. this chapter made me laugh out loud, and that's not easy to do. i love the way you write. please keep up-dates comming, especially for "pain in the ass"

Miroku and Inuyasha...*sigh* What a wonderful couple! Just reading this makes me wonder what Miroku's friends from his world would think if they saw themselves like this...and I wonder what Ronin is up to? Hmmm...probably gonna take over where Naraku left off I suppose...and also probably planning on trying to make Miroku his slut-puppy. I want more...I look forward to another update...til then Keep up the good work.

Ooooh an update! omg omg omg

I love this story so much, and things only keep getting better! ^_^

Inuyasha is a naughty, naughty boy, hehe...

I grant you, this was highly due for an update, and what followed fit in well with the existing text. Miroku's willingness to subsume his highminded principles for a nice fuck was well grounded in character, even as he attempted to keep the high ground in mind - later, yeah, later, we must deal with this!
Is it disloyal of me to wonder what is happening with Ronen Miroku? With Naraku's death his own kazaana is no more, right (or did he bargain that away by aligning himself with Naraku in the first place)? And what happened to all of Naraku's resources - can the Ronen access them at will, or will his humaness pre-empt him from much of it? I'm quite interested in the choices he made to guarantee his continued potential access to his double; after all, Inuyasha is at least as much of a barrier as Naraku was. The primary difference being that Naraku wasn't interested in keeping Miroku alive, whereas Inuyasha wants him alive but exclusively his. I confess, I want to know if the Ronen exercised any real calculus or simply acted on a short-term assessmen of probabilities (which would be interesting, since it assumes that the Ronen had decided that Naraku was the losing bet long-term).
I very much like Inuyasha's likening of Miroku's potential "intellectual" capacities with his brother's. I'm one of those who believe Inuyasha is smart enough but lacks the patience to work things out. Obviously, Sessh is perfectly capable of working out probabilities to the n'th degree, and waiting out the chess moves. Miroku as some sort of human intermediary is a nice image. Someone should write that story out now...

ok serisouly, well written and everyting but this version of inuyasha is really starting to piss me off. I think he gets away with way too much and Im just hopeing that at some point Miroku kicks his ass or something. Guess thats just the feminist in me. Either way loving your story. Keep up the good work and plllleeeeaaassssseeee update more often.

Ah I was wondering what was going to happen next in this story. I totally didnt expect that to happen, I figured they'd fight some more. Then again being a guy, I can understand being pissed when your pride gets hurt, of course Miroku is such an uke...haha. After that 69 page monster of a chapter I recently posted I can fully understand not wanting to look over it and just post the damn thing completely. I am a little curious as to why Miroku hasnt thought about going 'home' or mentioned 'his' Inuyasha to this new Inuyasha very much. I found it interesting how this worlds people reacted to the news of how the other world's one's acted.

KAWAII! XD! This chapter was the cutest thing I have ever read XD! Lol! I'm loving the length too!! Amazing job on the update and hawt lemon! I'm sooooo excited for the next chapter. I wanted to throw things at Inuyasha for being sooo over bearing but afer thinking about the big picture and understanding Inuyasha it's understanding, and expected of him. He wants Miroku safe and he's doing it the only way he knows how. ^_^. Anyways, so excited for the next chapter. I wish you would've read over it again and add more pages to it XD!! Lol. Can't help it you give us more and I'm left wanting more. Welps I'm on the edge of my seat wanting and desiring more. ^_^. Good luck on the next chapter. Hope it's just as long XD!

*chuckles* All your work is simply amazing and this is no exception I just read the whole thing all the way through and hhee I really am starting to like the Mir/Inu pairing!!

So when can we expect an update on some of your other stories? *hops*

I was so glad to see the update for this. I love this story, and I'm glad that Miroku seems to have reconciled himself to having feelings for InuYasha. Very nice.

I love the story! Please update soon! Btw, when is Miroku going to get the topper for his staff?