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boy, that just got a little weirder and complicated. Creepy Miroku killed Naraku....:shudders:

I love this story too!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon.

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY NOW!!!!!! This story is too good to left to be unfuinshed but I'll continue to be patient. IF you want ideas or need help to exute an one for this story send me an email LillianMace21@Hotmail.com.

So, of course, I find myself rereading your stuff while waiting for new postings. And, of course, nitpicking. It is high time the Ronin reappeared, but you already knew that. However, you've gone to such great lengths to draw distinctions between this dimension's Miroku and the one we know and love that you've lost sight, I think, of what was so intriguing about the whole multidiminsional concept in the first place. Yes, you've nicely shown all the other characters in the alternative reality with nice focus on their similarities and differences, but the most important character of them all has shown very few similarities indeed. Even the physical characters they share have been blurred in your focus on the greater years and different profession the ronin's life has inflicted upon him. I confess, I want to see rather more appreciation on his part as to how attractive his counterpart is to him - narcissus-style through a glass darkly. After all, Inuyasha was originally enthralled with the ronin for a reason, and that too shouldn't be lost sight of. Likewise, one of Miroku's most appealing aspects is his dark side anyway, and you haven't let much of that highlight his oh so lovely attributes. And since you've downplayed his physical prowess (much to my chagrin - I keep remembering Inu's comment on how he was no ordinary monk when they first tangled, and his later confidence in his own ability to ultimately defend himself) you really owe it to him to highlight his intelligence.

Sigh. You have too many *good* stories brewing. I appreciate how the variety gives you room to work, but it does make me sad when updates get shunted aside in favor of new ideas. Granted, one's muse is difficult to bring to heel, but I do suspect that might be the line that draws the difference between writers and drabblers. In fanfiction, I guess, we all must merely drabble.

Hello!

Sorry my English is bad. I want to say that the story 'The other Side of the Kazaana' is really funny to read. I like this paaring. It's one of my favourite paarings of Inu-Yasha. And you are not finnished jet...! =)

Yours Feuerfee Loveshort

I've been patient.

Now I'm not.

Okay, I lied, I never was patient.

But please, I need more. More of this and Crimson Samurai too. Please??? Pretty please?

PLEASE????

I NEED TO FIND OUT ABOUT THE CUTENESS OF THE CHILDREN!!!!!!!!!!

Did I happen to mention that I might cease breathing if you don't update soon?

O...M...G... Have I ever told you how much I love your stories? Yes? No? WELL I DO!!!! I just started reading this (since I needed something to keep me tied over until you update The Last Pure Human :P)and WOW! You really write superbly and yeah, there were a few errors, but damn woman! Those errors barely register when my mind is completely focused on all the yummy scenes of those two smexy men gettin' it on XD lmao. You really do know how to steam up a Yaoi room :P UPDATE SOON!!!!! *grovels and begs* lol

The last chapter was great; I love Inuyasha's personality in this story.

*squee*

So glad to see an update to this story! Lots of good on-the-edge-of-your-seat tension in this last chapter, and it looks like there will be a nice dose of smut in the next one! Can't wait. ^_^