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for The Other Side of Kazaana

by szaugg

person DahliaIceQueen
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now this is interesting, I love it. Can't wait to see how it plays out. Inspire, muses! Inspire this writer!
person oniku
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Another chapter and I still don't know if Ronin Miroku will get caught! At least Miroku is getting the idea about Inuyasha. Maybe? Maybe not. Still excellent to read though!
person Eerie
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Ha, and ha, and HA again! Trust Miroku to get so close and then just miss the mark like that. Now everybody knows the truth, including random wolf packs, and Miroku is heading down a completely separate mental path. This is tickling parts of my funny bone that I didn't know I had. :)
person MeLaiya
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, THREE DAYS!!! THREE WHOLE FRICKEN DAYS!!! Im not sure how much more of this I can take. Dont make me suffer anymore, please Im begging and every time you leave off. You leave at a monumental moment. ITS INHUMANE I TELL YOU!!! I-N-H-U-M-A-N-E!!! Oh and keep up the good work.
person Lee
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm used to waiting _weeks_ for the next chapter of my favorite stories. A couple of days is a _pleasure_. Besides, it gave me time to reread this one and your other yaoi oh, five or six times? Of course, after a great set-up chapter like this one waiting might be a little bit more difficult - with alt!Miroku still out there in the bushes and all - but it's _totally_ worth it. ;-)
person Lee
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O-kay, so waiting isn't so much a problem when you sneak in the next chapter while I'm still rereading the last one. Hurray! :)

Another wonderful lemon scene here, and you did a great job of showing how both of them - three if you count Inu's youkai - are thinking about the encounter. Personally, _I_ think about it as scorching hot, but that may just be me. Heh.

(Unfortunately, after that cliffhanger, I'll be refreshing the page even more often. If I develop carpal tunnel syndrome, it's on your incredibly talented head. ;)
person Deadlyhair
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What? You're just going to leave us hanging like that?

I hate you.

(re: the rest of the chapter ... eh. Not much of a lemon fan. But please update quickly! I say that knowing that you will. Seriously, you have no idea how much I appreciate being able to sit down and start one of your stories and know that I'll be able to finish it. I wish more aff.net authors were like you in that respect.)
person MeLaiya
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaahhhhh no no no dont let them take my poor miroku chan. And I love you so much for updating so soon. Yay and cookies with puppies for you. Loving it as usual. Update soon and keep up the good work.
person Aimee
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee! I knew coming back to this story again would pay off! Inuyasha finally gets his man, and how! The Ronin makes his move! Miroku is totally and cutely befuddled! *bounces* Favorite parts: the 'just five minutes' theme, the incredible hotness of the sex scene, the incredible sweetness of Inuyasha, the incredible cuteness of Miroku, and the incredible eep noise I made when I read the last line of the chapter. *loves*
person Grey
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is definitely my favorite Inuyasha/Miroku story of all time. This lemon tipped it over the edge. And it's not over yet, which makes it even better. Great job!