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I don't think I want to know what the Ronin did to make Miroku scream like that, but it can't be good. Thank god that he'll have Inuyasha to make it better! He will, right? Right? ;)

Oh, and I loved Hachi- he made me feel very, very fond of the Ronin for a moment there, which I never thought would happen. He definitely gets the creepy crown for this part, though I think Naruku still gets the general win. :D

Excellent story so far. I like the differences in Monk!Miroku and Ronin!Miroku. I do hope that Inu comes and saves him soon.....

Caitriona

You just blow me away with how fast you write and how wonderful the chapters always are! *loves everything you do* The tanuki creeped me the heck out, the Ronin needs mental help, and Miroku needs some kind of tracking device implanted into him with the amount of trouble he gets into. I hope Inuyasha can make it all better soon, or at least hand over the Ronin's head on a platter. ^_^

First of all, I've been reading this story since you posted chapter three, and I am so sorry having waited so long to review. I have really enjoyed the inventiveness that this story has. I absolutely love it and check every day for your updates. I enjoy the malevolence of ronin Miroku, and find the evil nature of the man compared to his monk counterpart almost frightening. Also, I love the persona you've given InuYasha's youkai, and how you explain the fact that it doesn't talk in such a way in the series. So many just have the youkai communicate without a real explanation. (It also makes for an additional character and fun antagonizer to InuYasha.) Keep updating. I can't wait to read more.

You really have a knack for combining suspense, romance, and comedy seamlessly. I don't know how you do it but I love reading it more than I can tell you. After reading this chapter I'm more glad then ever that you don't like unhappy endings since otherwise I'd be biting my nails off. Great job!

Wow. Another great chapter! I kept wincing every time the Ronin did anything, and wishing that Inuyasha would get there faster. Very creepy and sexy scene.

Just to let you know, the site isn't letting people review now if they don't have an account. Most people don't have an account, so you might not hear from your regular readers. You might want to put up an e-mail address or something like that - it'd be a shame if this great story didn't get the reviews that it deserves.

Eeee! Totally worth it to get an account to review this chapter! *loves* Miroku is oddly appealing while he's being tortured, Inuyasha is smarter than the average bear - er, wolf - and Ronin Miroku, while still unsettling as all get out, has a strange kind of sadistic charm about him. *clings to new part and pets poor Miroku* Brilliant! ^_^

Hey,

Awesome chapter. Can't believe this is only your second yaoi you're so good at it. I hope Inuyasha notices that Miroku is gone quickly!!

I hate cliffhangers! I do love this story though. Damn Mutt better save the day.

im so addicted to this story... you have no idea! lol AMAZING!