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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O omg...he killed Naraku? Damn...wow...good Miroku is so screwed with Ronin Miroku on the run >_< sorry for not reviewing your last chapters, i've been a bit busy. But great job with the plot and the twists =D Loved d lemon by the way, awesome
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, the end part of this chapter is.. rather dark, and strangely enough, rather satisfying. Now that Naraku is dead, we can get on to better things. I really like the image of Inuyasha wrapped around Miroku trying to comfort/calm him. I am very interested to see where you take us next.
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I should be freaked out by the last couple of scenes, and I kind of am, but I end up thinking about Miroku sitting in Inu's lap with his hair being played with. *grins* This may be my mind trying to protect itself, though, since the first and last scenes there scared the heck out of me. *nodnodnod* I think that Inuyasha should never let Miroku out of his lap ever again...and also, yes, they really should have asked about Naraku's death earlier. *shakes head*
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
Speechless here. That was just... well done and amazing and so many kinds of creepy that I don't even know how to tell you. Good god. Wow. Yikes. The ronin _killed_ him. Wow. And I didn't see it coming even a little bit. And now I don't even know that the ronin would be the lesser of two evils here because at least Naruku had _other priorities_, man. Wow. Beautiful, beautiful work.
Speechless here. That was just... well done and amazing and so many kinds of creepy that I don't even know how to tell you. Good god. Wow. Yikes. The ronin _killed_ him. Wow. And I didn't see it coming even a little bit. And now I don't even know that the ronin would be the lesser of two evils here because at least Naruku had _other priorities_, man. Wow. Beautiful, beautiful work.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW...I wasn't much of a inu/mir fan but this story is so original and well written I will be sure to read others. Just wondering what happened to Kagura after she got her heart back from Naraku, does she hook up with sesshy?
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I have taken so long to get to this, but it was so well worth the time!! You have the most amazingly brilliant warp to your brain, and I beg you... BEG YOU ... never ever stop sharing it!! I am about half way through now, and enter Kouga. Miroku's blush is absolutely adorable. And Sesshoumaru's comments about InuYasha pulling his vocabulary out of his ass... GODS so appropriate!! Thank you for once again sharing your genius with us all!!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Oh hell yeah. Pulled an Inuyasha and took that right out of my ass.”
That was the funniest line in the whole chapter, I swear it. I laughed aloud and my roommate gave me the strangest look in the world.
It is your way of writing humor and Miroku that keeps me coming back time and time again for more. Update when you can!
That was the funniest line in the whole chapter, I swear it. I laughed aloud and my roommate gave me the strangest look in the world.
It is your way of writing humor and Miroku that keeps me coming back time and time again for more. Update when you can!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok... like right now you are my favourite person of all time! omg... i'm freakin addicted to this story *hangs it up on the wall* this seriously needs an award... lol GREAT JOB
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee! Two chapters at once! *dead from glee* Inuyasha is just being so sweet here in his own bizarre way, and I love that teasing Miroku is becoming a communal hobby. Other loves: the conversation with Shippou was sweet and sad both at once, the scene outside was hilarious, and Inuyasha comforting Miroku just made me want to curl up and sigh. Wonderful!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, happier times, thanks. BTW, Why isn't my Sesshomaru getting some adult activities? Hell, everyone is getting some but Sessh. Also I like this Sessh. Even though he is OOC, great job.