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for Hanyou Times Two

by szaugg

person Tenshi Youkai
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ramen!!! Oh, that was so great!!!! I can't believe Kagome smells like RAMEN!!!!! This is such a great story!!! I am very much looking forward to the next chapter!!!!! I can't wait!!!! The girls are really in for it now!! They deserve everything they get for being so cruel with the subjagation beads. Update soon!!!
person ardy1
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear. This story is just too funny for words. Please, please make it your priority over the other unfinished stories. I mean, they are good also, and lots of fun to read, but this one has Miroku at his best - scheming, clever, strangely innocent in a delightfully worldly way, and very manly. As for his becoming half-demon, well, that's an interesting and enjoyable twist as well, not to mention giving him a wonderful opportunity to empathize and bond with Inuyasha. Yes, you really must make it your priority!
person Trampled_Rose
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! So good. You are so good at wrighting! Please update.
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing my ass off the whole time I was reading. ^_^ Please update soon!! I also read your other story, "This is gonna be fun.".... fucking hilarious. Please write the sequel.

Ja ne!!! ^_^
person Tenshi Youkai
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! THis is going to be sooo much fun to read!!!!! I love this story so far!! It is so funny! And everyone is in character, which is so nice!!!!

Are you going to give Sango the subjagation power over Miroku? What will happen if he looses control of his beast? Will Sango have to knock him out? Can she anymore?

Oh the possibilities!!!

I love your style of writing and the humor that is present in your writing. It is so welcome from all the angst that is so prevalent in Inuyasha stories!! Keep it up!!!

Please update soon!!
person ardy1
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I've read your other stories and I just want to say you are wonderful. What an imagination you have for plot and humor! But truly the best part is the characterization. Inuyasha and Miroku play off each other so beautifully that you really don't need anyone else. I confess I like them better as friends than lovers - the balance between them works better, I think. But either way is a fun trip to read. Thank and I look forward to all of your updates!
person nameless
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww this is good, hope you update soon. It's amusing to watch miroku deal with his frustrations.
person Krazy Kid
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Like It alot
person ArticTiger2000
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What??????? More.. there's gotta be more to read.. Right?? *giggles* Update Update.. just as it was getting interesting :)
person Lady Laran
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this one and can't wait to see what you'll do with this. The only thing I wonder about is that since Miroku does have a lot of spiritual/holy powers, would the subjugation beads even work? Please update soon