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yippe an update cant wait to read this

omgosh u absolutly have to make a chapter aboute inuyasha and kagome or i will simpley die do u hear me DIE! i love ur fic i swear i was gunna have a heart attack if u didnt update soon so pleasehurry and with ur other fics to especially this is gunna be a pain in the ass i love that one!!!!!

thanks for updating, I love this fic, in my opinion there is not enough lecherious miroku out there. Please update again soon, your other fics that your working on is slash which really isn't my cup of tea. So please update this fic ASAP!!!!!

Heh, I did have to go back and read the fist couple chapters again. Not like it was a chore or anything; I really love the idea behind this story. This latest chapter was really great. The boys are kinda acting like knuckleheads but I mean that with love. Storming into camp and grabbing their respective women to sniff and bite was just short of clubbing them over the head and dragging them off by their hair, caveman style. Now Inuyasha doesn’t really have a suave bone in his body but Miroku’s usually a little smoother than that. It was super funny though, especially the arguing over Kagome’s and Sango’s shouts about who’s harder to carry. The carrying pudding part was sheer gold.

Hopefully both the guys will slow down a bit and, ya know, get the girls’ consent before getting some “relief.” Although I don’t think poor Sango will be giving her consent right away. Was there some reason why the mating bite seemed to hurt more for her than Kagome? That is assuming that Inuyasha managed to do it like Miroku seemed to think. Kagome was still yelling but not crying, right? I mean really, if Inu had just asked nicely he probably could have avoided a lot of ear ache. Anyway, this was a great chapter. Glad you managed to squeeze in a little time to post it even though you are still without your own computer. Hope you get it back soon!

Very nice idea and no one become out of their character. It’s just not fair to break at this point.

update u have not updated i need an update!! please!!!!!

please!!!!!!!!!

Inuyasha has a puppy pal how cute

"I did't wish my smile to be out of character, Sango."

Vanilla Ramen
Inuyasha a more disturbed creature
I don't know I think Sango may end up being a little more than just
disturbed when she finds out she smells like a brothel

Miroku could have taken off the beads the entire time
Inuyasha on his knees haha apologizing haha
it seems you don't like the beads that much
you seem to get them off inuyasha fairly quick in your fics
had to feel for miroku glad he could take them off

so any more puppy pal play love puppies

yeah i liked your intermission sorry you had problems at the other site
it was nice to receive the update on what was going on

I don't think we would like to see miroku go on strike right now
I want to see the puppies play

back then when i saw you first post this one up i was like another one yes!
lets out breath no!
I was still hung up on waiting for the sequel

then I read this first chapter and thought may have a new favorite may not

once again I'll take one of mirokus lines
"I'm afraid I may have miscalculated slightly."

looks like your muse went all over the place and is over at the one fic for now
by the way i'm enjoying and i can wait for the sequel of the one fic
of course i have no choice but to wait and be more than happily satisfied with all else

once again another fun chapter

the celestial maiden good pick for changing miroku sniffing around haha

the beginnings of miroku adjusting hahaha
so miroku kept his spiritual powers
so is his blood as strong as inuyasha got from his powerful pop
or is it under control a little because of them
didn't seem to controlled as far as sango was concerned but he just became hanyou huh

mine down boy dodges sango all fun hahaha

sango smells like a brothel haha
brain hasn't had any blood for seven days
perpetual erections and no sex
a little cruel to the boys in this one
gonna make it up to them later?