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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad chapter despite the fact you wrote it with a concussion. I don't think I would have been able to type at all. Actually, I probably wouldn't have.
Anyway, despite all that I enjoyed watching Miroku stick his foot in his mouth with Sango as usual.:-) Always entertaining!
Hope you recover swiftly!
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Anyway, despite all that I enjoyed watching Miroku stick his foot in his mouth with Sango as usual.:-) Always entertaining!
Hope you recover swiftly!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!!! Please continue!!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I stumbled back on this and I confess, next to "Pure Human" it's my favorite of your unfinished fics. But the last chapter, while definitely good in recognizing the reality of the girls' likely responses to the guys' jumping them like that, still lacked something in the "fun" category. Which would be totally fine if you'd followed up with a witty chapter showing the guys stumbling through trying to make things up in their own distinctive and initimable ways - not commenting on the possibility of success at this point. Miroku's human perspective on being hanyou was half the fun, and we're not getting it. Knowing you, I know you want critique, not just praise. You are fully capable of providing humorous insights on this odd concatenation of events - so c'mon, woman! produce!
(I need inspiration to write...)
(I need inspiration to write...)
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I liked everything so far. Heh heh...Miroku is in deep crap now! * laughs evilly * And, I don't agree that the last two actual chapters sucked. I liked them a lot in fact. I can't wait for you to update. ^_^
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, chapter 5. Could Miroku be any more self centered? He's just soo dim at times. Of course Sango would cry and be all upset, you carried her into the woods and bit her without explaining why you did it! Sheesh... I did enjoy how he sniffed her all over. But him and Inuyasha just are the idiotic twins...
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, this was just so priceless!XD See, Miroku, dear, that's what you get for being a pervert! He's really trying to convince himself he doesn't hae the hots for Sango, isn't he?...<3
Btw, I followed you here from y! and I'm going to read all your other stuff now that I found them.
Btw, I followed you here from y! and I'm going to read all your other stuff now that I found them.
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor, poor Miroku... I loved Sango's changing scents...
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Into every good author's life, a little darkness must fall..."
Or something profound that I'm unable to articulate properly.
Basically, just letting you know how much I enjoy your writing and hoping you don't loose YOUR enjoyment in thinking them up. You make well written, thought out and intriguing plot-lines that I thoroughly enjoy reading and I'll hang out here on this newly improved puter and read all your wonderful flights of fancy that you so kindly let us in on. Thank you! Really truly, thanks!
Or something profound that I'm unable to articulate properly.
Basically, just letting you know how much I enjoy your writing and hoping you don't loose YOUR enjoyment in thinking them up. You make well written, thought out and intriguing plot-lines that I thoroughly enjoy reading and I'll hang out here on this newly improved puter and read all your wonderful flights of fancy that you so kindly let us in on. Thank you! Really truly, thanks!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you feel better, I hear sunshine always helps depression. I anticipate the next chapter, good luck writting!