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continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus

That lemon was hot!

Awwwww!!!! I am sooooo on a diet, and this is just waaaaaayyyyyy too sweet. You've got a nice piece of fluffy-ness here. I have a hard time with Sesshoumaru coming to his decision that he is in love with Rin so easily, but I have to admit, I do like the sweet stuff too. You know...the kind where while you are reading it you blush and smile and squirm because you feel like you're spying on a private moment. One thing I would suggest for your writing though, see if you can break up your paragraphs a bit. Spacing helps the reader foucus a little better and helps with the transitioning through the story....okay, I'll admit it, it's a selfish suggestion...it would help meeee read it more easily. Anyway, keep the fluff coming!

Awww that's so sweet. It's sad that they got called demons whores. It's so wrong. I love your story though. Please update soon. Keep up the good work.

Despite the spelling and grammer errors, this is a good story and look forward to the next chapter.

Awwww that's so sad and cute at the same time. Please update soon. I would love to know what happens next. Thank you for being such a good writer. Take care.

That's so cute. Update soon. I want to know what happens next. Please continue.

I like this chapter. It's sweet and totally cute. Just so you know you do have some mistakes in this chapter. I just wanted to let you know. I don't mean nothing bad by it. Take care and continue sometime soon please.

This has the potential to be very sweet.