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for Unrequited Love

by KowaiiMusume

person Danny Girl
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story today ...... This is a "GREAT" story, oh please update soon.
A little advice next time if you have a chapter sadder than chapter 3 please let us
know in advance so we can have the tissues ready ;) ....till the next update.
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww that was sweet and sad kikyos a bitch and shes mean!...add more soon!
person Kimiko Sakaki
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another update!!! Cant wait till the next one...

this chap. didnt piss me off as much as the last 2 ones...Inu wasnt being THAT much as a pig but...yea, and Kikyo had finally become bitchy? Through that phone the other day, thought she was sweet or something...*gags*
person inugirl06
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgawd. please update soon! i love it. and i love hinder too. the music you chose is like perfect for this story!!
person citrusbaby
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. Inuyasha is a strange man in this story. His emotions and attitude towards Kagome and the world seem to flip flop quite often. Still, despite him being an asshole, I'm going to assume that his background built him to be that way, so I can't help but feel a little sorry for him. I mean, yes, Kagome is the victim here, but seriously, if she was a street child, she should've known better. And like Inuyasha, she should've been at least a little tougher. Interesting plot, update soon!
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The song lyrics are annoying and make the short chapters seem longer than they are.
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still depressed
person SultryRayn
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I think this story has great potential you made me cry... and I like to cry if that sounds wierd... damn Kikiyo I hate her I hope she dies...lol... she is just there to fuck things up for Kagome and Inuyasha
person Kimiko Sakaki
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAT? INUYASHA'S SUCH A SEX-CRAZED BASTARD! HOW COULD HE USE KAGOME LIKE THAT? ARGH!!!

well, still, i like the story and hope you'll update soon!!!

Kimiko
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HE CRIED!!!! one tear but still!!!
that's soooo sad *sulks*
great chap *sniff* add more soon