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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. But this is all so sad. Why can't Inuyasha let that conniving bitch go?! I know that that's easier said than done with someone you loved, but Kikyo has got to go. She destroyed his life once, and he's allowing her to do it again! Inu is such a great guy in this story, and he and especially Kagome deserve so much better than this. I just hope that he comes to his senses soon. Or even better, that kagome starts kicking some ass when it comes to Kikyo. That chick is poison to Inuyasha, and it's past time he realized it. And it also past time for Kagome to start fighting for the man she loves. Again, easier said than done. But then again, the things that have to be done aren't always easy.
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Great chapter! Loved the way Miroku told him off!! Yee Ha! And I was relieved that he left Kikyou without anything happening between them. So, he thinks he has to let her go to keep from hurting her, huh? Why? Does he still think he wants to be with Kikyou? Because if he's finally, REALLY realized what she's like and if he has feelings for Kagome, why would he think he would hurt her? Then again, he hasn't exactly decided he loves Kagome, has he? (The moron!) What will they do -- where might she go if he "lets her go?" It kind of seems that might put her in more danger from a lustful Naraku. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh . my . Gad!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he's leave her!!!!
*sulks*
that's just mean he'll only end up hurting her more if he leaves!!!
he's leave her!!!!
*sulks*
that's just mean he'll only end up hurting her more if he leaves!!!
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January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I created an account just to come in here and review you! I love this story, but it is so sad. Kagome is so broken and Yash is so misguided...what will they ever do? I shall wait and see. Ja ne!
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story get better and better with each chapter
you really do have a hit on your hands. I would like
to thank you for updating so soon. I'm glad Inuyahsa
didn't do anything with Kikyo and that he was too worried
about Kagome, but Mirkou did have a point he did leave
Kagome in the hands of a devil (Naraku) to be with Kikyo
I also like that when Inuyasha was looking for Kagome
a light bulb (though dim) came on about Kikyo.
I can't wait till the next update.
you really do have a hit on your hands. I would like
to thank you for updating so soon. I'm glad Inuyahsa
didn't do anything with Kikyo and that he was too worried
about Kagome, but Mirkou did have a point he did leave
Kagome in the hands of a devil (Naraku) to be with Kikyo
I also like that when Inuyasha was looking for Kagome
a light bulb (though dim) came on about Kikyo.
I can't wait till the next update.
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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes! Just strted reading this story -- VERY intetresting! As always, Inuyasha is too stupid to know when he's got a good thing. I was almost hoping Naraku succeeded with kagome just to make Inu wake up and smell the coffee. Such a fascinating setting you've chosen for this fic, and I love the storyline. I hope you write more soon!! And I hope Inu doesn't succumb to Kikyou -- he knows what she is, and he knows what he has in Kagome, so he needs to break free and wise up. It's almost painful to read about Kagome getting stepped all over. (Which means your writing is good!)
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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heeeey
i'm normally anon but i had 2 sign in to review this chap . . .
anyway
naraku must die i dont like him -_- so yea add more soon!! lookin' forward to it ^_^
i'm normally anon but i had 2 sign in to review this chap . . .
anyway
naraku must die i dont like him -_- so yea add more soon!! lookin' forward to it ^_^
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I've never read one like this before. It is also new seeing Inuyasha in this perspective, I'm used to him being very dimwitted and abrasive. Anyway, I really like this story and I can not wait to read more.
~*Elisa~*
~*Elisa~*
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. It's taring my heart apart to read how much pain each of them is going through. Beautifully written and I can't wait to see what's next hopefully something a little more happier for the two. Great job.
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. But, MAN, Inuyasha frustrates me! I LOVE him in this story. Your characterizations of both Inuyasha AND Kagome are terrific. But, he is such a FOOL! Kagome clearly loves him, and he loves her (whether he knows it or not), but he keeps wasting his time with this sorry, unworthy bitch who doesn't care about him at all. Kikyo just gets some sort of perverse pleasure out of toying with his life and emotions. Why can't he see that? And poor Kagome is just caught in the middle. In love with a man who keeps self-destructing over a (married!) slut who doesn't give a flying crap about him! It's enough to drive a reader nuts, lol. I just hope that Inuyasha realizes what's going on before it's too late. Eventually a woman gets tired of a man using her as a replacement for someone else, no matter how much she loves him. I'll definitely be looking for the update.