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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it! you did a fantastic job!!!! =)
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I agree -- it was just the way it should have been.I have to mention again how much I like the style you have adopted for this story. The way that each chapter just briefly lets us know what has been going on in the meantime and then focuses on one scene is very effective and compelling. It's amazing how much can be conveyed in just a line or two. I was blown away when kagome told him she had talked to Kikyou. I'm dying of curiosity about that conversation. Obviously, Kikyou knows Kagome left then, so will she continue to "dog Inu's footsteps?" And these "people she met" who have helped her find a place to live and a job -- who could it be? So many hints -- so many questions raised. Excellent! I can't wait for your next chapter! I have to assume Inuyasha will be searching for her, ne?
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love chapter 10 it's great. Poor Inuyasha he is going to drink his self
to death. He can't catch a break. Now he can't find Kagome and the girly man
Jak is no help, I think he does know were she is and what is with all the appointment
Kagome has been going to. I can't wait till the next chapter please update soon.
to death. He can't catch a break. Now he can't find Kagome and the girly man
Jak is no help, I think he does know were she is and what is with all the appointment
Kagome has been going to. I can't wait till the next chapter please update soon.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I wonder what Kagome has planned....and I really hope that Yash can get himself together. He's a mess, just falling apart without Kagome. But I guess he should have realized how much she really meant to him BEFORE he ruined their relationship by going with Kikyo. He definitely made his bed.....and he is certainly ROTTING in it. I just hope Kagome will give him another chance...when he gets himself together.
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So nice that Inuyasha finally saw the light!! Too bad he let Kikyou hurt Kagome again, though. I'm so glad he didn't let himself soften for Kikyou's tears, -- even if they were real. It's about time she learn to deal with the consequences of her actions. The big question now is: what happened to Kagome when she left? Will she just leave, or will Naraku be waiting for her somewhere? How many times does she have to put up with this crap? Even if it wasn't completely Inuyasha's fault this time -- he knew what time he was expecting her, right? He couldn't fight off the embrace of a woman in time to chase after Kagome? What a wimp! I love the way you told what happened qwithout having to actually write the scene -- that was really well-done! Can't wait for your next update!!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When will Inuyasha and Kagome get a break? I'm glad so very glad that
Inuyasha finally told Kikyo how he felt the he loves Kagome, now
Kagome's gone and what will Inuyasha do to get her back? I like how
Inuyasha told Kikyo stop calling Kagome a whore because she only known
him and Kikyo sleep with anything that has meat hanging between it's legs.
Now that was priceless. Chapter 9 was a great update till next time.Oh
question will we find out what Kagome was going to tell Inuyasha in the
next chapter?
Inuyasha finally told Kikyo how he felt the he loves Kagome, now
Kagome's gone and what will Inuyasha do to get her back? I like how
Inuyasha told Kikyo stop calling Kagome a whore because she only known
him and Kikyo sleep with anything that has meat hanging between it's legs.
Now that was priceless. Chapter 9 was a great update till next time.Oh
question will we find out what Kagome was going to tell Inuyasha in the
next chapter?
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm dreading the next chapter!!
but...
I cant't wait to read the next chapter!!
i'm dreading it because i'm just waiting for something bad to happen to her and for her to die or something!!! ..... But! that wont happen! will it?
but...
I cant't wait to read the next chapter!!
i'm dreading it because i'm just waiting for something bad to happen to her and for her to die or something!!! ..... But! that wont happen! will it?
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so, I take it with that last chapter... Inuyasha has wised up to the fact that He is simply .. infatuated with Kikyo and honestly in love with Kagome?
Gods I hope so because it would be fucking dumb of him to not realize it.
By now.
There's something she needs to say? uh oh! it's not a mini inu/kag is it? lol
ugh, update soon. I'm intrigued.
Gods I hope so because it would be fucking dumb of him to not realize it.
By now.
There's something she needs to say? uh oh! it's not a mini inu/kag is it? lol
ugh, update soon. I'm intrigued.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, chapter 8 was too sad, I'm glad you did advice
tissues before reading this chapter. Well now Inuyasha
see what he lost living in the past messing with Kik-ho
I like how his light bulb is coming on it seem to be getting
brighter with each chapter. What he wanted was in Kagome noe
Kikyo. I can't wait till the next chapter to see what Kagome
has to tell him. Till next time.
tissues before reading this chapter. Well now Inuyasha
see what he lost living in the past messing with Kik-ho
I like how his light bulb is coming on it seem to be getting
brighter with each chapter. What he wanted was in Kagome noe
Kikyo. I can't wait till the next chapter to see what Kagome
has to tell him. Till next time.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapter! Most of it was so angsty, but the last part perked up quite a bit. So, what does Kagome want to talk to him about? And what kind of an appointment does she have? I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.