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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe man you had to stop there on the GOOD PART you're such a tease UPDATE SOON PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE WITH A VIRTUAL CHERRY ON TOP!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! He's goin to try something! I hope he doesn't force him self on her...but that would get under sesshys skin, if his half brother was to disgrace the family even more that way....
Also I couldn't help but notice that you confused my with this paragragh...
*Perfume is supposed to make guys more attracted to you, eh? Well, I don't see my baka half-brother here, so she must have been trying to attract me. He ran his tongue over her suddenly dry lips, staring at Kagome like she was a tasty bowel of ramen. Maybe camping in the winderness won't be so bad tonight.*
With the part of *He ran his tounge over HER sudenly dry lips...* and the *WINDERNESS* part confused my as well, cause I have no idea what a winderness is...
Other than that, I luv it!
Up-date soon!!
TTYL;
megan
Also I couldn't help but notice that you confused my with this paragragh...
*Perfume is supposed to make guys more attracted to you, eh? Well, I don't see my baka half-brother here, so she must have been trying to attract me. He ran his tongue over her suddenly dry lips, staring at Kagome like she was a tasty bowel of ramen. Maybe camping in the winderness won't be so bad tonight.*
With the part of *He ran his tounge over HER sudenly dry lips...* and the *WINDERNESS* part confused my as well, cause I have no idea what a winderness is...
Other than that, I luv it!
Up-date soon!!
TTYL;
megan
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to read more
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I was laughing as you sorta described an actual dog, sniffing for something new to him! My dog does that all the time, she sniffs around for treats or bones, but never finds'em!
You know...after kags puts some of that dog attracting stuff on...you should have them run across a dog-dog, not a demon one, and like he trys to hump her leg, that would be hallarious!
But, if you dont like it you dont have to use it, I'll just chalk it up on my idea list...
NE ways!
UP-DATE SOON!!:-P
I cant wait till the next chapter!
TTYL;
megan
You know...after kags puts some of that dog attracting stuff on...you should have them run across a dog-dog, not a demon one, and like he trys to hump her leg, that would be hallarious!
But, if you dont like it you dont have to use it, I'll just chalk it up on my idea list...
NE ways!
UP-DATE SOON!!:-P
I cant wait till the next chapter!
TTYL;
megan
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh ok its just sometimes it hard to follow up with. ^_^
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is a great story, I can't wait for you to up-date, and I hope that you finish this one!
Oh, And I think I know what her plan is...but I wont voice or write it down, but I doo applad your brilliance!
TTYL;
megan
Oh, And I think I know what her plan is...but I wont voice or write it down, but I doo applad your brilliance!
TTYL;
megan
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it please update soon!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uhhh why doi you always write the chapter little then continues ???/ anyhow good chapter what other way to go get sesshomaru than get close to RIN>>>>???
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh wonder what shes gonna do there ayayayayayay cant wait for more!!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOM UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PWEASE!!!!!!!!!