rate_review Reviews

OH YEAH!!! I love the naughty Kagome.

You are mkaing me feel like poor Sesshoumaru in this fic. I am waiting like a good little puppy for the next chapter. You know you always do this to me keep me on edge longing for the update. DAGGIT I need to get a life....lol.

WWWAAAAAAAAA I WANT MORE

I am, as you may know, very picky on what I read, and what I review. I enjoy reading your stories, ALLOT!
And I cannot help but notice, you have a rallent...
This is a great story, and you should continue it if you can...I want to point out though, just to make it better of course, you made a few spelling errors, and I know you'll only listen to me if I show you the errors, but I just sujest that you read her alone time, before Puppy shows up, a little more carfully...
Again! That is Just for makeing it more understandable to me, others might allready understand it, I know I do, but that one sentance was confusing to me...
Other than that, it was stupendusly(sp)great! Hopefully You will continue with your own challenge, and I want you to know that I enjoyed the two stories I have read now, the Eyes of a Hunter, and this one, that I have decided to read your other ones...^_^
Ok, I am rambling, I do that offten...
SO! lol, continue with this story, and up-date as soon as you can, but I am patient so take your time!
TTYL;
megan

I usually prefer Kagome to play the innocent and pure role, but seeing her dominance over Sesshoumaru is definitely empowering. Not only that, but an insane turn-on! So is this all about the sex, or will something more come out of it? I'm so excited to see what else happens. This is wonderfully written and you've most certainly got me hooked.

Wow ! With you, sexual hot passion is displayed for our very great pleasure ! In the Photograph, the first of your stories I read, you put a lot of subtlety (right word ?) that bring your text to be delightful for me to read. I love it. And Kagome is so naïve and immature…
In Lost Innocence, she has also some immaturity in the way she reacts by discovering sexual passion and mixing it with her temper. Such a wild miko warrior !!! I hope the poor Sesshomaru will be able, one day, to tame her maybee by giving her what she needs to know real love… (Is that your plot ??!). So thank you very much to share your passion to this interesting couple. You write especially HOT ! and I am glad to have another of your story to read yet.

From a french reader,
Bonjour de la France,

Merely Truth

Game indeed! I like this game I like it much. The chapter was alluring even though short it held me and pulls me along for the next chapter. Can't wait to see.

*fans self*

OH LORDY, LORDY!

That was great, please update soon!

^.^

Snap, I almost fell off the chair this chapter!

Voyeurism, self-pleasure and domination! Naughty, Naughty, Naughty!

But me likey! Please continue the Great Job!

P.S. Sorry to the author of Cereal Box Romance but I agree!

On the other hand, I can come to this story when 'Overly controlling Seshoumaru' starts to get on my nerves in other fics.