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for Lost Innocence

by Vague

person Kawaii Kilala
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...well, if you can take a lap top with you, like I do at my colledge and at my work as a secretary for a Vet., you might be able to type up a bit every now and then...like some professors in my classes just ramble on and on and on, but I have found If I just pretened to be reading over my *notes* I can IM my friends who may be in that class or in a different one, or read one of your story, or some one elses, or Review yours or some one elses, Or (I know, allot of 'or's lol) I could continue with my own personal story, which I'm thinking of doing something with, but I'm still not sure it's up to my standards yet...~_^
Ok, back to your story!
I was getting really ecsited(sp) and then I read/imaginarily hear 'Kagome!' I imagined it was Puppy cuming, but no, it was only Inu getting all in the way again, and being a party pooper!
I was almost disapointed, until I heard/imaginly hear Kagome tell Puppy about his treat!
I was salviating at that point! Just imangining it made me hot! I trully cant get over your story! It's just so great, and realistic, what with all of his arrogent 'I belong to no one' stuff. But you forced him in the end, with his desires working against him as well...he stood to no chance with you and his own desires after him!! ^_^
I am a patient being, most of the time..., and I can wait because the "real" world is "more important" than ours, apparently...
Good luck at school/work and I hope you get time soon to up-date, but, quoteing my mother, "Your studies come first! Not fantises and boys!" LOL! :-P She thought she knew me, but she didn't! Obviously!
But really, finish school so you can write more stories!
TTYL;
megan
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! your so good at this!!!!
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Lord. Yes.

Right now, the little fangirl in me who loves Sesshoumaru and Kagome is smiling like a crazy person while the little hentai in me runs around her going "Squee!".

And my brain is on fire. On the floor. Well done.
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAGGIT!!!! You left me drooling waiting to see what was next.
person angel
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot i love it .. and now he belong to her ... hehehehe please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Sweetcakes
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another very hot chapter! Looks like poor Sesshy doesn't know what hit him, and it looks like this is only the beggining! And I would never say you suck...well, maybe your spelling at times, but not your writting. ^_^

I think I'm starting to get an idea of what it is that Kagome lost, but I don't want to say anthing in the event that I'm right and spoil it for your other readers. I'm curious to see if you'll Sesshy be the dominant one (at least once) just to soooth his ego. It's kind of funny watching him taken down a peg or two, or three or four. It makes for one heck of an interesting story.

This is looking to be another one of your great ones, and I plan to be along for the ride, waving signs of encouragement and keeping the Spank Vauge fan club alive...hee hee.

Till the next chapter,

Sweetcakes

person sasha
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is the best. i absolutly love the idea of sessy being all submissive. i really hope you will update everyday because i want to read every bit of this story. i'll be waiting on pins and kneedles. your fan sasha
person amhor56
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter once again. There's something really special about this story. I can't quite put my finger on it though. Love that Sesshoumaru can't get it his way. In all the other stories, he always does. Nice change, I admit. And in reality, Kagome is stronger than him on some level. She can purify him. But he still is literally stronger than her. Maybe a better example would be, Superman and Kryptonite. Yeah, that's it. Once again, fantastic job in describing their sexual needs; I loved it. I am literally on my knee--because I have a big, painful bruise on it, and I refuse to use it--begging you to update soon.

Oh and on another note. I love your muse and as you can see, so many readers do too. So please, tell her not to be afraid. The only reason that I could possibly think of that people would flame you, would be if the were completely ignorant. This is your story and nobody should tell you how to write it. And even if they don't like it, then tough, tell them to stick it where the sun don't shine and to stop whinning, just because they didn't get there way. Sorry for the ranting. It makes me mad to know that one of my favorite authors got, or gets, flamed. Anyways, update soon!!! I'll be looking forward to it.
person Lillian9
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. He is going to burst if you don´t let him have her soon :-)! Poor puppy.
Kagome is an eeevil vixen.

I understand it very well if you can´t continue reading a story if Kagome or Sesshoumaru sleeps with another. I for exemple HATE it if Kagome turns demon (or IS an half demon/demon whatever, uäärgh!).

Please update!!!
person poohbear
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luv ur stories please update soon
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