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for Lost Innocence

by Vague

person amhor56
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have got to continue and update soon. That was amazing. I felt their passion. Geez...where's my boyfriend?
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY your back. Great come back chapter.
person Tori
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are back! Vague I have been pinning for you for the longetst. Your stoies make my day. And this one and the Photography story are great I can't wait to see whatelse you create within this story. However I wonder when is Sess, going to gain back some ground of his own and taken control. I mean Kagome is and will formost be in control but come on what is fluffy known for, his good looks, his sexy-ness, and Ah hell...Your right to pin him down, and even better he should be tied down. He's a walking sin. You keep going now don't let this site get you angery. Your the best at what you do and that's making good stories for us to read, giggle over and to make you love what you do. Keep your readers reading.

Thank you
person Liquorish
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE NEXT TIME DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru as a sub? That's a fairly new concept, I think deep inside he secretly wants to be dominated by something-- or someone-- This is a finely written story with a good style and it is highly addictive! Ten stars on this!
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are my favorite author on this site.
If you choose to further your work, please email me.
I'm sorry the sight being troublesome.
Thank you for creating what you have.

M
person Chococat
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And I quote, "I don't feed strays." Damn1 Where the hell did you come up with such a line? It threw me for a loop. And when she calls him Puppy. Yeesh! Thank you for your wonderful writing
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I read this before when it was just a single chapter, and I must say that I'm loving it! (Sorry if I hadn't reviewed before, I'm terrible at actually signing in to do so)
I love the story, and hope to hear more of it sometime in the future, but I guess it isn't very likely with aff.net's sign in thing.
<3

Angel
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You go Vague!
I, my self, who is not sure about her writeing, had to make a whole new account thing, when I'm probably only going to use it to review!
It is a waist of a perfectly good account for someone who wants one to use to write wondeful stories!
I believe your solution is right, and will wait patiently for them to take that into consideration before you up-date your story...though I might get impatient after about half a week...
BUT I will still stand loyaly by your side in this desision you have made!!!
TTYL;
megan
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that there are authors out there who share my opinion on the matter of reviews. Some people write because they love it. We want to share with people what our (sometimes demented) imganiations bring. Reviews encourage authors to continue. Without them, what is the point? Sometimes I could care less if I recieved a review or not because I enjoyed writing the update. But when I get that one single flame (that always seems to be Anon) I can't help but wonder who the hell this person is. Is it a random person who does not write? Do they not know exactly how difficult it can be sometimes to write something? Do they understand writer's block at all? Wow, sorry about the rant! Lol, I love your writing. Keep up the good work.