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Great =)

He ripped her top off of her and took her breasts in his hands squeezing it, pinching her nipples. She began to struggle as he caressed her clothed breasts.

Slight conflict in that. And several spelling errors and grammar problems. You need a beta. But nice story concept so far.

you are ingenius to make kagome take control. i love it update asap! =]

I like it so far, good job. Please update soon

Well written!

Oh My God! Ya know at first I was like confused cause at one point it looked like Sessy was winning the Kagome, and then at the end it cleard up and wow....I was like the writer pulled it off...I mean she pulled it off. You have the push pull thing going on but you really pulled it off, Bravo!!!*clapps.*

Now what's next?
Is sephy going to continue to let this happen?
Is there going to be 50-50 he rules the kingdom and she rules the bed?
Or is it going to be equal and he gets even with her?

Lordy, lordy...you did it again, hey this story is just as good as the last one dear keep it up!!!!

I knew it was you before I looked who was the author :-)
It´s magnificent, as your stories always are! Interesting... tables turned... I hope our favourite dog demon NEVER gets bored of Kagomes little game!
Please update soon (ALL of your stories!)!!!

Very interesting! Like an aggressive Kagome having her way with Sesshoumaru! But I'm not sure I get the idea behind her "giving up her innocence" so Kikyou could live. And is she trapped in the Feudal Era or there by choice or can she go back and forth? I would enjoy at least another chapter of this story -- a "what happens next" kind of thing. Neat idea!

GAWH sure stop there update soon lol.

hoy shit!---that was good! more please, more!