rate_review Reviews

yay! a girl taking charge for once I love it. i want to read what happens please continue.

Woah! Have I ever told you that you write the hottest lemons ever? Because you do. Love it. I havent read a story like this one. Kagome being dominant? Simply genius. I would love for you to continue this story. But I believe I read in the author's note something about a One shot? Hmmm...

I like it so far. You did manage to hit a pet peeve of mine though, there is no thrusted, the past tense of thrust is still thrust. There is also thrusting & I think that's it.

You should continue it. I want to see the reactions of the other people when they find out about the two.

damn girl! you are one twisted sister! and i'm right there with you! lol.

this is what i was talking about earlier in my review of 'mending a broken heart.' the writing in 'lost innocence' is tight and cohesive. this first chapter is you writing from your zone, crafting your tale. you write some of the hottest fiction i've every read [and i've read jacqueline suzzane, harold robbins and a lot of winter-warming romance novels], but i would read your fics even if there was NO sex because you are a good writer. you have a great imagination and you tell good stories. now get a good night's sleep and update soon...

HOT! It was great. Update please.

Holy Sh*t! Fans herself very vigorously! This was so good and hot!

Never thought of Sesshoumaru as the submissive type but boy does your story flow!

Loved it! Please update SOON!

Hm...Something a bit off the beaten path. I like it!

wow that was awsome i love it .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now ... have a happy new year

angel

that was interesting.

update soon.