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for My Boyfriend's Brother

by Unknown

person E.J
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurry up hurry up add another chapter come on add another chapter. I love this fic. I wish it wern't thoe.
person GuardGeek
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the long long chapters! I only wish I could write like that! Great Chapter can't wait for the next one!!
person Kawaii Kilala
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you did quiet well in keeping them in character! No need to appologise!
NE ways!
This is such a sweet chapter! I luv how you had me on the verge of tears when the good byes came!
Oh! And the tails! :-D That was Halarious!
Is Kagome going to tell Sessh about Shippo's nickname for him any time soon?
And you should make it so that the next time they mate, Kagome bites Sesshomaru in the juncture place, and drinks his blood and turns into a half inu demon with a black tail and black ears! That would be SOOOO cute! And their baby would really be a 3/4 demon!
And keep writeing this story! It's really great!
TTYL;
megan
person Pastel
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I love how Sesshoumaru said that Kagome is in charge :) Anyway, update please.
person madmiko
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I'm wrung out after all that! Quick gestation period. Cute, little puppy-eared baby. I had to laugh when you threw in the tail for the baby AND Inuyasha. Her talk with Inu was so emotional -- so heart-breaking. You did such a good job with it! Wonderful chapter!
person Tori
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw gosh. I loved that chapter too. I mean it had the love and the brothery love it was good indeed. Thank you much I liked it alot.
person AIdeen
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story!!! So good!!! I love how they came to be together!!! Oh this story is sooo good!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
person anika-kitty
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH...MY...GOD!!!! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!! seriously you have got some wicked talent!! in other words, I LOVE IT ^_^!!! i just love the way you portray sesshomaru...it...i dont know it just make him so much hotter!! and thanks for mentioning me in your story and for letting me know about your update. well im eagerly awaiting your next update too. i also love how your stories are soooo long...its perfect ^_^. well once again congrats on a great story and hope you update soon...ps do you have anymore stories written? if you do let me know k? well ciao now!

anika-kitty
person valerie
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just thought i'll drop u a line to tell u how wonderful ur story is. I really enjoy how you portray Sesshomaru its amaizing and new, great job!!
person swtdrm01
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet!