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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME update soon pwease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have been enjoying every word of this and chapter 5 was a hoot! i wondered how mama would take having a taiyoukai for a son-in-law. i'm still laughing.
you've got a really tight storyline going and its very well written. i can't wait to read more!
thank you.
you've got a really tight storyline going and its very well written. i can't wait to read more!
thank you.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome chapter! Loved the visit with her family! And loved your take on their reactions. Most of the fics I've read have her Mom being so accepting of Sess, so this was a refreshing change. And vice versa for Sota. Excellent take on it. I like the way you answered one of my earlier questions about Inu's being invited to join them -- I still like the idea of him being accepted in. (Like I said, I don't think he'll ever love anyone else, so it's great that he can be with her -- AND Sess -- this way. He knows he's still loved, and he's not missing out completely on the good stuff. Ha!) I'm so glad they're going to join the hunt again. It should be very interesting with a pregnant Kagome. I can see Inuyasha being extremely protective along the way, too. Can't wait to see the interaction between the three of them during their travels! This is just such a great story! I can't wait for more!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, I hope you , well, I just don't know what to say about the Inuyasha/Kag/Sesshoumaru! I hope it was a dream because Im just well not sure how I feel! But the story is great, and I really like the demoness issue! Ok, well I just wanted to let you know that this is your story and I am sorry if i offended you, but I don't think I did because you are a great writer!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: I was wondering if he had any lovers when he was younger…^-^
Wow, I didn’t think they would try to get Fluffy away from Kagome though, definatly good thing he decided to stay beside his mate ^_~
And I never thought that Inuyasha would be a peeping tom! He just doesn’t seem to be able to contain himself...
Though I never thought Fluffy would invite him to join...
And since Inu isn’t her mate, his seed isn’t potent is it? Like he ca’nt give her a baby can he?
And oh, that was so cute! Them shaking hands, and Inu’s face turning into a tomato, lol!
Chapter 5: Ok, that was…odd…
I always thought that Kagome’s mom would have a name, other than mama...hmm...unless that’s her name...
And it was nice of Fluffy to show her the moon, I was hoping he would have sex with her in a cloud...but sadly that was not to be...*pouts*
Oh, and hopefully mama has come to like Fluffy, at least a little bit any ways….
And I am sorry about not reviewing last chapter, but I was busy that day, and then another one is up before I can even review it! Seesh! Going fast enough! LOL! ^-^
Though, I am glad that the chapters are long!
And I DO ADDORE THE TAILS! AND I would never dream of booting you for such a triffle thing!
Now, if you were to stop this story….I might kill ya for doing that…but you never know, I might just hurt ya really bad!^_~ But that’ll never happen cause you wont stop this story!
TTYL;
megan
Wow, I didn’t think they would try to get Fluffy away from Kagome though, definatly good thing he decided to stay beside his mate ^_~
And I never thought that Inuyasha would be a peeping tom! He just doesn’t seem to be able to contain himself...
Though I never thought Fluffy would invite him to join...
And since Inu isn’t her mate, his seed isn’t potent is it? Like he ca’nt give her a baby can he?
And oh, that was so cute! Them shaking hands, and Inu’s face turning into a tomato, lol!
Chapter 5: Ok, that was…odd…
I always thought that Kagome’s mom would have a name, other than mama...hmm...unless that’s her name...
And it was nice of Fluffy to show her the moon, I was hoping he would have sex with her in a cloud...but sadly that was not to be...*pouts*
Oh, and hopefully mama has come to like Fluffy, at least a little bit any ways….
And I am sorry about not reviewing last chapter, but I was busy that day, and then another one is up before I can even review it! Seesh! Going fast enough! LOL! ^-^
Though, I am glad that the chapters are long!
And I DO ADDORE THE TAILS! AND I would never dream of booting you for such a triffle thing!
Now, if you were to stop this story….I might kill ya for doing that…but you never know, I might just hurt ya really bad!^_~ But that’ll never happen cause you wont stop this story!
TTYL;
megan
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man! That was a great story with great lemons. Loved the last one the best though.
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pardon me while I catch my breath. Whew! Is it hot in here? Or is it just your writing? Hands down, that's got to be the most erotic chapter I've ever read. And I do mean erotic -- not just tittilating or naughty, or even HOT. EROTIC. And you did so much with it! I am in awe. Honestly, I thought this story could have ended after the last chapter -- SO glad it didn't!! First, Kagome and Sess together for the first time since the birth -- incredible. So realistic and amazing detail. Love them trying not to wake the baby! (Been there, done that.) Then Akane showed up. I was thinking: major insecurity and angst for Kagome -- even with Sess' explanation. (And maybe you plan to bring her back to cause trouble -- don't know.) But I thought it was handled maturely. Then the whole Inu/Kag/Sess scene -- blew me away! Did NOT see that coming. LOVED IT! Using it as a way to help Inu, who loves her, and to help the brothers bond, (and to give the rest of us a big thrill), well, I bow to your genius. Sess was generous, yet still true to his superior, condescending attitude toward Inu. Showed his love for Kagome as well as a desire to help his brother over his pain. And Inu got to see how much Kagome loves Sess. My only question is: was that a one-time only invitation or a standing invitation? I've got to say, it would be fantastic to have Inu come visit them. (Let's face it: he won't ever love anyone else -- he was loyal and loved Kikyou for how long? Would his feelings for Kagome be any less binding? I don't think so. And of course Kagome loves Sess, but would she not love Inu, too? They have a soul-deep connection, ne? So, I love this solution. Brilliant!!) Will there be more to this? Again, you could end it right here and it's already a classic. But if you have more, I can't wait to read it!!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the storie but the last part was creepie
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was sick!! how can you make sesshomaru and Inuyasha kissssssss ewwwwwwwwwwwww and while Kagome is there tooo I hate this shit all though i have no prblem with gay its just that its so creepy!!!
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!! Inu and Kagome miss each other! Can't wait till the reunion with her family!