rate_review Reviews

Awesome!! You've done it again. What a terrific chapter! The emotions, the insecurites, the thoughts, and finally the acceptance of both of the brothers about this situation they never expected to find themselves in ... you've brought it all to life and made it all so real and believable. I salute you! I have enjoyed this story every step of the way. I love it that Sesshoumaru has retained his attitude through it all, and love the interaction between him and Inuyasha. Heck! I've enjoyed the way this story has explored their relationship as much as the steamy romance in it. You turned this into much more than the average Sess/Kag or Inu/Kag fic. When this stopry is finished, I will avidly await your next one. You've got a real gift for writing and such a great handle on these characters. I can't wait to see how you're going to wrap this all up! It was too bad Shippou had to interrupt Inuyasha. How will their friends react? Will they finish the quest? I thought Sess was going to make him wait until the quest was over -- glad he changed his mind! It doesn't seem necessary now, but I had a thought about how to soothe Sess' feelings about the pregnancy: if she found out exactly what it was that had him so unhappy about it (the fact that he thought Inu's sperm was more potent than his),Kagome COULD have just given him a quick science/biology lesson about how that particular night, he let Inu "go first," and therefore the egg was already fertilized before his little swimmers even had a chance. No real reflection on the potentency -- it was all in the timing. Anyway, I have loved it all, and I can't wait for your next posting!!

wow kegame baby is inuyasha . why that was a super and sessu. is ookay with that. then he ask kagome to have one more for him. that was good and now he trying to talk to inyuasha . i lve the story be waiting for the next chapter of the story.

Well I thought I'd finally add my 2 cents in here. All is well written, and the lemons are great. Its your story and all to write how you want it. Well I'm just giving feedback. I wasn't the happiest with the threesome but I could see it as closure for Inuyasha as he saw how much she loves Sesshomaru. Then when they had a single scene I thought less of Kagome and Inuyasha as he was invited into "their" bed not allowed to mate with Kagome whenever or wherever. I see Kagome's behaviour as disrespectful to her mate. As to her suggestion of letting Inuyasha mate with her till he finds someone is rather stupid in my belief and shows more disrespect to her mate. Inuyasha will become more attached to her, not less. He moved on after Kikyo, he will be able to move on after Kagome. Being a friend to him not a lover will help him with this. On the hunt he could meet someone on the travels he finds interest with but if he continues to mate with her, he will never go away and continually be a sore spot for Sesshomaru and Kagome. I find Kagome being in the wrong in continuing with Inuyasha especially without Sesshomaru since HE is her mate NOT Inuyasha. She is not showing any loyalty or consideration of her mate's feelings which I feel is a keystone of her character. I understand during those times things were different as one pointed out brothers sharing one wife, but I doubt the brothers could share like that unless it was done from the beginning as an aggreement. This is not a flame I enjoy the story very much just my opinion on what is going on. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I thought you wanted the truth, but pardon me! I never meant any harm towards YOUR fic, oh and by the way I know the difference between fanfiction and true stories! If you don't want HONEST feedback, then DON"T tell your readers to give it to you! Oh don't worry I WON"T read nothing else that contains your work! ACTUALLY, I really liked the story, but stick it and leave good critical feedback alone, you can't handle it!

Ooo Ooo! What happens next!? And are you sure its his baby? Cause it might still be sesshy's...maybe...possibly...okay no it cant be, but still, there is a possibility...never mind ignor that...
I wish it wasn't Inu's baby, but hey! After sesshy gets a second baby of his own from Kagome she'll just take the pill......
Ya know...Kagome should bring a health book to the feudal era, for sesshy to read, and like show him that while she is pregnant her eggs stop producing, and that its fine to have sex at the moment, and her period stopped so that should tell him that it would be okay for her to have sex with Inu...
Also, if they were to have anal sex, after the baby was born, then both Inu and Sesshy could have sex with her at the same time, and Inu could get her back while sesshy gets her front and then only sesshy's seed would be potent, cause seed can't reach an egg through the butt, that is just not probablem!
Okay, now that I got that outa my system...
Please up-date soon! And have a fun time writing it!
TTYL;
megan!

Whoa! And WOW! That chapter was awesome! I absolutely LOVE the idea of Sess being upset and jealous because the baby is Inuyasha's. That would be a blow to his pride, and yeah, I can completely see him revoking the invitation at this point. I am blown away by your genius in using this as a plot point. I loved the way Sess proved his dominance by forcing Inuyasha to submit. And mentioning the possibility of a second mate through Sess knowing she had read some of his scrolls -- you really know to work things in to best advantage. As always, the matings were hot, hot, hot! I felt a little sorry for Sess -- it's obvious he is feeling a bit vulnerable now, but to have to ask if she would leave him? How the mighty have fallen! Kagome will have to reassure him of her love and build that tremendous ego of his back up, won't she? Perhaps if she has twins or triplets for him next, he can get all macho again. Well, I just can't tell you how much I love this story. You are a terrific writer and this is a terrific story. I can't wait for more!!

Sex Sex and more sex thats all I read and yet GOD fluffy-sama is BIG. damn Kagome is lucky.

Nice! Wherez fluffy at?

girl you are amazing!! you still got that touch...and even though the inuyasha/kagome scene isnt to my prefrence in pairing it is still captivating as ever....but i did love the threesome you had going for a while...it was incredibly hot!! and even though i'll be sad to see this story end im looking forward to the ending because im sure you will make it exceptional! and if you create anymore stories let me know k? cuz im your recent dedicated fan ^_^ well ciao now! looking forward to your next update ^_^

this is a great fic!

i can't help but think that kagome's relationship with inuyasha will (or maybe should) have some effect on sesshomaru. or maybe thier relationship is just so open that it doesn't matter that she's sleeping with her step-brother? what if kagome gets pregnant by inuyasha! lol

anyways i can't wait for your next update on this fic. it is really great!