rate_review Reviews

I liked the chapters so far except for chapter five. Rin is starting to irritate me to a point where I wish she'd just break her neck and die so I don't have to read about her anymore. I'd rather hear about Jaken than her annoying curiosity.

I also thought that Higurashi Mama was very out of character. I didn't mind the OOCness of the other characters in the past chapters or in this chapter, but Higurashi Mama has always been accepting of everything Kagome does. Her disapproval of Sesshomaru because he's a demon doesn't seem realistic since she likes Inuyasha. Kagome's mom isn't prejudice of demons at all. I expected the prejudice to come from grandpa since he's a stickler when it comes to demons. I expected him to try to purify Sesshomaru and fail but not Mama.

I also think that Souta would call Sesshomaru onii-sama or Sesshomaru-sama. They're brothers-in-law now and that would have been the proper terms. If Sesshomaru permits it Souta could call him oniisan even.

Anyway, I liked all the other chapters so I hope you don't think I'm flaming you or anything like that. I still like the rest, just not the annoying Rin and Higurashi Mama in the fifth chapter.

Back from a long unwanted hoilday time! Sweet I love the witty humour, and the funny side of Sessy, and of Inuyasha. I love the plot it's working great too. Continue on it's going good.

In the beginning i like the story with sesshomaru as kagome's mate and them having a family but i don't like inuyasha being involved in kagome's relationship with sesshomaru and inuyasha sharing kagome's bed nasty!!!!!! get rid of him now kill him off or something so inuyasha will go away.

Geez this girl get layed alot. Reminds me of how bad my sex life realy is.

HAHA! I'm really enjoying your story so far. I'm currently starting chapter 2, but I just had to take a moment and tell you how much I loved this particular line: "Since he had learned Kagome was attracted to him, Sesshomaru had become something of a menace." My side hurts from laughing at that one. Nice work!

Chapt. 4.... Damn! I sure as hell didn't see that coming! haha! At first, I thought this story was going South with the Sesshomaru/Inuyasha interlude (not into the incest yaoi - personal preference, you understand), but then you totally surprised me with the fantasy thing! LOL! And it was HOT! I really found Sango's comment hilarious. "Did Kagome bang your heads together until you agreed to be friends?” HAHA! Miroku - that hentai - knew what was up. LOL! Great job. Really.

Ah! Beautiful! I'm so glad that they're all going to be a big happy family. I certainly love the fact that Inuyasha won't be alone after killing Naraku and he can actually raise his child. Update soon

I really like your story. But i don't like how sesshoumaru has to share his mating with inuyasha. I think he should just be on the side and leave Kagome and sesshoumarus mating relationship alone. You are kind of being unfair to sesshoumaru in this fic. He seems to be giving up a lot.

I have to say that I am blown away with this story. Not only have you given us a love story, complete with sizzling sex, you have also written about the very complex subject of having more than one lover. You have taken into consideration not only Kagome's feeling but also the two brothers' and dealt with them realistically, instead of just ignoring the more complicated feelings or brushing past them.

They way you portray Inuyasha's reaction to Sesshoumaru's explaination of the second mate is simply perfect. Perfectly Inuyasha. You have everyones character down so well. Yes, Even in the case of Sesshoumaru. After all just because he hides behind his mask does not mean the emotions are not there. I can not wait to see how you finally get them together and how you deal with everyone else' reactions. I am sure that it can not be all smooth sailing now that the brothers are so close to having a real relationship. One based on trust and love.

Your insight into the workings of the mind in dealing with the intricacies\jealousies of a threesome are most appreciated. Most people cann't even think past having a third person aware of what goes on in the bedroom, let alone write about it with such grace and eloquence. I am so grateful that you have shared this picture of what life, and love, could be like. It gives me hope that I am not the only one to entertain such thoughts.

So, When are you going to have those two hot boys kiss again? That was such an excellent scenario. I especially like how Sesshoumaru had to assert his dominance over Inuyasha and toy with him just a little. VERY HOT!!!! Also a very Sesshoumaru thing to do.

Keep up the excellent work!!!! And ignore anyone who feels the need to flame you. They are just narrow minded dweebs who are too afraid to open thier eyes/minds/hearts to the possibilities around them!!!!! ;)

I'm not entirly happy with this chapter...I think its because Inuyasha doens't seem to understand that she loves him, but not like she does Sesshy, also, why is Sesshy being so okay with the second mate thing? Hmm? That is way too out of character for me...:-( And I want to know why you are makeing them all mates, and why you can't just find Inu his own mate? She-kags-isn't really acting like a true wife or mate to Sesshy, she's putting Inuyasha's happiness infront of Sesshomarus, she deosn't even think about how this will affect their -sesshy and kags's- relationship! I am not very happy with this, it just seems wrong to me, I'm sorry, but still, I just don't like them all being mates. I don't mind them shraing the same bed and haveing sex, but the mateing thing just doesn't sit well with me.
Well, update soon,
TTYL;
megan