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Excellent battle scene. Akane is one very weird and horny thing, ne? Poor InuYasha. The embarassment alone at being touched through his pants was enough, but she got a good look when pinned that even I wished he would have killed her. Our Inu is just so "shy" about letting it all hang out like most guys. Bet Sesshoumaru was enjoying his little brother's predictament quite a bit. And giving a thought to Sesshoumaru bringing a sort of peace between human and youkai, maybe in the future youkai won't be diminished, ne? He'd be the one who saves his species extinction. And thanks for the reply to my review. It's a common thing to my family of females [we are many] to teach each other from young womanhood to cleanse ourselves regularly and often [to ward of infections and odor] that it's just something I thought to ask seeing as these things are so readily available to take with you anywhere and reuse the "douche bag" anytime with water and vinegar or water and herbs in that time period. Kagome seems to me to be a smart girl. She could figure out somthing knowing herbs and all. Maybe I'm just that way, but my husband was as conscience of cleaning there too, so I just assumed...he was my first and only and 12 yrs older than me, so I thought it was cool he cared like I do. Putting your mouth on a clean area as such is so much more satisfying than not in my experience. I love to hear him tell me he loves that I always smell so fresh. He'd been with women that weren't and didn't like it a bit. He said he'd never give tongue to a woman because of the smell. So, anyway my friend, food for thought. I have another little tidbit that I've noticed when gals write stories, can I share? Hmmm, you really aren't here to approve, ne? When a woman is pregnant, by the 7th or 8th month their breasts leak milk, some, not alot. But after the birth a nursing mother's breasts WILL exrete milk when touched,pinched, suckled, even if this is done by her lover. Heck, mine would squirt in many directions like a spray effect. We used to laugh so hard. He said my milk was so sweet and that's why my daughter couldn't be weaned for 12 months. She refused a bottle. They also leak WHENEVER a baby cries or if your baby is due a feeding which makes it really hard with being in public unless you carry absorbing padding and I don't mean that little pad that comes with nursing bras. My doctor told me I was made to feed twins or even triplets. I carried extra shirts for me in her diaper bag. Again, food for thought. I was told that alot of guys actually like sucking their woman's milk and find it erotic. Hmmm... So, anyway, I can't wait to read more of this fic and I really like the affection Sesshoumaru shows InuYasha. And is he getting alittle curious about{you know] with Sesshoumaru? Think about Ayumi maybe helping Kagome out. I thought you might have been thinking along those lines.

Just lovely. I definitely think you did Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship credit with this chapter. His understandable and justifiable anger gave way to violence in a completely credible way -- he's a demon, for gosh sakes! A demon lord, even. And Kagome's defiance and anger at him just fueled those baser instincts. I was truly on the edge of my seat, wondering if he would come to his senses in time -- thank goodness, he did. He definitely crossed way over the line, but I loved it that she understood and accepted some of the blame for it, and was able to forgive him. Again, she has to remember who/what she's mated to -- he's not a man, and she has to realize he won't necessarily react like one. But once she called his attention to the danger he was really placing her and their baby in, he was able to re-gain control of himself, for their sake -- I wasn't sure he would, and I know a lot of people wouldn't have liked it, but I still would have followed you with it. Because you've managed to build such a full picture of him. Anyway, after he was recalled to reason, when he was filled with regret and no small amount of anguish, they actually managed to talk. A lot of it came out when they were angry, but it wasn't until then that they were ready to hear it. And, his instincts to protect his unborn baby gave them the common ground to proceed. His remorse and guilt were almost painful to read, but, oh, how I loved it when she later had the same reaction he did. You brought it all full circle, and let them both learn to truly appreciate and accept the other one. Funny how underneath it all, they both felt unworthy of the other one. How amazing and wonderful! This was truly a chapter to cherish, and you spotlighted their love and relationship beautifully. AND, Inuyasha was there at the beginning and the end, in such a sweet way. I can honestly say, I have never read another story with the three of them as the main characters that I've enjoyed more than this one. You've brought such depth to their characters, often in surprising and unexpected ways, but always with sensitivity and utter believability. I like it that she's having twins this time, too. I wonder if the birth will go smoothly? Hopefully, they are all feeling a little more secure now, especially since you are working on some battle scenes -- we don't want them going into battle again with those doubts, worries, and insecurites hanging over them. And I have to mention her healing efforts. Thanks for not suddenly making her all-powerful or having her restore limbs in a flash of gratitude or love. I like it that the effort to heal those small wounds was taxing. Seems very real -- especially while she's pregnant. But now that she knows she can do stuff like that, I wonder if you have plans for it. I'm looking forward to your next chapter, as always. There's nothing like a good, thought-provoking story, with not just one, but TWO fantastic heroes, and a heroine to root for -- all of them deserving, but gratifyingly real, and none of them perfect.

This is a review for both chapters 11 and 12.

First I want to say that chapter 11 was definitely heartbreaking. To see a rift growing between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was killing me! And the fact that he has shown an attraction for Inuyasha was confusing as well (even though it was hot beyong belief). This chapter further displays just how complicated this love triangle is, and the line that distinctly seperate my favorite pairings is becoming quite blurry. I don't know if I'm more for S/K or I/K or S/K/I! Now you've thrown in a bit of S/I, too? To put it simply, you are blowing my freakin' mind. :P

Chaper 12 was nothing less than an emotional rollercoaster. To see the breakdown and the make up between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was painful, sexy, and sweet. To know that at the end of the day Inuyasha will still come back and join them in bed, it makes me think that the love will be strong enough after all. The love that all three of them share, that is. Great job, again! You always keep me guessing and never fail to amaze me with each new chapter. Keep 'em coming, ne?

why that was good chapter and i lvoe the way you make sess cry cry i love it and that was a good cahpter can not wait for the next chapter of the story. up date soon.

You know, you have really made this combintion pairing work for me. I usually pass when I see yaoi pairings as it is not really what I prefer reading, but you made this work without any drastic changes in the true characters. It really is a good laugh how Sesshoumaru freaks out InuYasha so easily. I like InuYasha putting restrctions on Sesshoumaru and Sesshoumaru telling him he's not a rapist, nor does he feel the need to push InuYasha into what he doesn't want. I really feel for Kagome though and was happy when I came to the part where InuYasha admitted that he and his brother both loved her and were not using her as a toy or baby maker. InuYasha can be so sweet sometimes...you had him so concerned that he cried,he didn't pout, he actually cried. Now that's a real man to me! I do think they should have said something about the roleplaying game getting out of hand...knowing Sesshoumaru's keen nose. [Kagome may have bathed but she gave no thought to douching before letting Sesshoumaru lick and put his nose there?] Are you going to have anything said about Ayumi finding out? I'd kinda like to know if she can keep a secret now that the gossiping school girl has grown up and Kagome can have a friend in the future she can go to when she needs a doctor and an understanding friend. The part where Ayumi asks about Kaogome having sex with a "dog" demon was priceless. Wonderful thought and a very natural question if you don't know anything about demons. I'm so glad I happened upon this fic. I've been extemely entertained from the start.

Well looks like things are looking up more now. Good chapter. Twins!! Way to go Sesshomaru! One thing is making me curious. What is up with Yuki? Her morning moments and comments... Thats twice now. I'm happier now we've had some Sess/Kag moments again. Very touching/emotional/loving scene. Need more hehe at least to balance it out and bring them closer again( of course, my opinion but its your story ). Hmmm sounds like the next chapter gets interesting too. Wonder what they will talk about in the morning... they've made up and had some "discussion" but they need more( all of them).Trust can easily be given but once lost(even a little) it has to rebuilt and proven. Inu has seemingly gotten off a little too easy ,at the moment of course. Till next time...

this story is nice and all but its so weird how Inuyasha and sesshomaru are sharing Kagome. I hate shearing my boyfrined with any girls.

Absolutely wonderful! Your imagination and talent know no bounds. The continual evolution and revelation of the relationships, thoughts, and feelings of the three main characters is so tastefully done. (I am wondering why Inuyasha didn't just jump into the well when the wolves surrounded him.) So, I wonder what Kagome and Sesshoumaru talked about before she left. I liked the way you brought out her thoughts and feelings due to Ayumi's questions. That was such an interesting scene. And, of course, Inuaysha and Sesshoumaru's interaction was great. I had to laugh at Inu's thought that this must be what it's like for Kagome with Sessh on top when the bear pinned him! Classic! I'm glad there are a couple more chapters to go. I'm going to be so sad when this fic is done because it's one of the BEST.

woo hoo, two chapters I hadn't read, yee ha! Liked 'em, nice action scene with Inuyasha running around, very 'hot' scene between the two guys, and I liked the fact that Kagome is conflicted. Ooooh, is she gonna be pissed when she finds out sessh knew, eh? looking forward to more!

Hmmm, trouble in paradise, been expecting something to happen( Murphy's law works here). Its another well written and felt chapter. Reminds me of a line from a song "Trust is more important than monogamy". The secondary's main rule is to obey the primary right? Well can't wait till next chapter. Keep up the good work.

alatera

"In many things we may disagree, but its the listening to each other that matters the most." ( this is just something I wrote nothing really to do with anything. Just felt the need to post it.)