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i'm sad to see it 'end' it was an amazing story..
i'll keep this on my list of things to check later in case you decide to continue ^_^

what happened to your fics?

It's been a long time since I read this story. I was so sad to see that you were putting it on hiatus, but I can't say that I don't understand the reasoning behind that decision. There's so much to say about this piece, though. I think it's more than worth the effort of me stumbling through compliments and honest opinions

From the very beginning I was quite taken with the storyline. This is so unlike any other Inuyasha fanfiction I've read before. To be honest with you, this was the story that got me addicted to the Sess x Kag pairing (so THANK YOU SO MUCH for that, haha).

Another thing that really pulled me in is how marvelously you played on everyone's emotions. Often times I'd find myself feeling rather raw after reading a chapter, and it moved me. The fact that I became so invested in each character's feelings was a bit shocking, but now that I think about it it just speaks of your ability to connect with your audience on this extremely complex, yet primitive level.

I know that for your own sake you must be feeling quite disenchanted with the reactions of many of your reviewers. I can only hope that someday soon you will find the motivation to continue this wonderful story. Until then, I will still be devoted to "Regretting You". Thank you for your time, and I eagerly await more of your work.

- Naomi

AWWWW...I'm sorry, but I'm going to miss this. You're the first one to get me to actually like this threesome and that's not an easy thing to do. Is there any way I can get you to email me when you do finish it? I'll be such a happy little hentai if you would do this for me. I really have enjoyed this fic so much and I only review fics that really impact my brain. You have quite the talent going on and I hope you find time to come back. My email is: v-lazar@sbcglobal.net...My name is Jen...Tana is an old Indian name I went by with my friends at school so we could write notes and not get caught. God bless you on your new path. TTFN

that was so totally awesome you rock..

Sorry to hear that. Was looking forward to next chapter. Will keep an eye out for this story though. Well written teaser. Best wishes on your other fics. Just so you know I found your story to be well-written, emotionally intriguing, and very stimulating( blush).




"when someone hurts you, tell them,"- quote from a book a friend gave ( still not easy to do)

i'm so sorry you've had to deal with the 'inflexibles,' the sorry one's who can't accept anything that slips beyond their granite boundaries and come down hard on anyone who dares to exercise their imagination beyond those sad limits. but i've enjoyed your story so very much and have thought that this novel of yours to be just that: quite novel! sorry, just a little wordplay. you've shown a great deal of technical skill, as well as doing a marvelous job of developing a wonderful story. i am sorry you've put it on hold and will keep my eyes on the general catagory for its resumption. thank you for your hard work.

Hmmmm. Very interesting. You have an amazing capacity to continually surprise me. I was not expecting an attack and battle scene, and had completely forgotten about Akane. You wrote the scenes very well. I was disturbed by the Yuki/Inuyasha interaction, as well as by Sesshoumaru's telling Inuyasha he could take other lovers, and the Akane/Inuyasha tension. (I saw the Yuki possibility hinted at in a couple of earlier chapters, but ignored it because, well, because I don't like it. LOL!) Just when I think the three of them (Sess, Kag, and Inu) are really merging and emerging as a family unit, bang! There's a loophole just waiting to explode the dynamics. I just can't see Inuyasha as the type to take a lover when he has a mate he LOVES. I don't think his heart would let physical attraction sway him. He's loyal and faithful to a fault, as proved by his earlier devotion to Kikyou, even at Kagome's expense. I appreciated his thoughts about Sango, though, as well as his explanation about how he had never really been attracted to her like he was Kagome. Sesshoumaru's thoughts about Akane and Kagura also disturbed me on some level. I have been viewing his love for Kagome as being something new and different for him. I am now feeling completely sorry for Kagome. These two brothers love her now, but, she wasn't/isn't the first true LOVE of either of them. There's something inherently sad about that, and I can't help but think she would always feel second-best. HELL! Neither one of them would even be with her if Kikyou and Kagura were still alive. That thought just leaves me feeling depressed and unsettled. I know some readers may have felt Kagome was getting the best of both worlds in having both brothers, and that she should choose one, or that she was being unfair to them, but I honestly feel sorry for her after this chapter. I would think she would feel eternally insecure. (I would.) Inuyasha was her first love, and Sesshoumaru was her first love to really make her feel he loved her, too. These glimpses into both males' previous love for other women and current attraction to/desire for other women make my gut clench. It lessens and cheapens their love for Kagome in my eyes, and leaves me feeling uncomfortable. (Why was it she never took Kouga up on his offer? Apparently, he's the only male that ever just loved HER. He's looking pretty good to me right now. LOL!) And now, I am feeling their faithfulness and fidelity is in question. Nice way to repay the mother of your children. At least no one else has done THAT for the brothers. I take it Sesshoumaru can also take lovers? If the males can, then she should be able to, too. What kind of bond is that? I don't see any future in a committment with those kinds of loopholes -- it's Vegas! I definitely have to hope that neither Inuyasha nor Sesshoumaru will take advantage of that possibility. That could ONLY lead to a breakdown of the love and trust they share with Kagome, even if she "okayed" it. Look at the trouble they've had with just the three of them!!! You add in another partner -- one that only one of them would be with, and it's over, baby! I don't believe Inuyasha could have a lover without developing feelings for her, and I just don't see him letting that happen. He chose to commit to Kagome and I think that means something to him. That would stretch the bonds way too thin. I don't even want to THINK about the possibilitiy Of Inuyasha taking a lover like Akane or Yuki and potentially having children with her. In the case of Yuki, we're talking about a female in a subservient position sharing her mistress' mate. That's really blurring the lines in SO many ways. How would that affect her position in the household? She would grow to resent Kagome because she would her equal in so many ways. Kagome would have to feel awkward about having her help her, knowing she was also intimate with her mate. Inuyasha would have to feel incredibly awkward having one lover serve the other one. What a mess!! And, I understand Kagome needing to stay with the children to protect them, but I wish she had been in on the battle. It would have been nice to see her defeat Akane and prove her own strength and worth to her mates. Having voiced my feelings, I hope you don't think I am being critical or telling you what to do with this story. You write it the way you want it -- this whole enthralling, intriguing, wonderful story has been your brainchild from the start, and I have been enjoying it immensely. It is unique and captivating, and I am still in awe of your imagination and talent. I just wanted to let you know how what it made me think and feel when I read it. To me, whether I agree with it or not, love it or not, THAT is the mark of a damn good story -- one that brings out your emotions and leaves you thinking about it long after the last word has been read. (Of course, I still have to hope it all works out the way I want it to ... LOL!) As always, I will be anxiously awaiting WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.

Well, that was interesting. Nice battles. Akane is a loon. Think someone needs to put her down,heehee.I feel that is not the last we see of Akane. The idea of Inuyasha taking other lovers with Kagomes consent interesting. He is second mate after all. But since he is mated to Kagome I doubt he would( loyalty). The mating thing throws it off . ( that would change the dynamics of the current relationship. I know the brothers don't mind sharing but I'm not sure Kagome could do that). Even with her letting Inuyasha see Kikyo in the series, they were not in a real relationship yet. But earlier Kagome was willing to invite him to their bed till whatever.The thing with Kagura threw me for a loop. We know the brothers are much older and have had previous relationships,loves,etc. Hopefully she is first in their hearts now. Second love or even third can be stronger than a first love( even if you never completely forget it). Its first love we normally learn from the most, but we can and normally do move on from it. I wonder how Kagome views her love for the brothers though( are they different in how she loves them?) Loved Inuyasha teasing Sesshomaru. He seems more comfortable with him now. Well so many questions... Till next chapter. Keep up the good work.