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for Living Your Life

by mjeims

person Demonlordlover
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too funny. This is a nice twist on the body switching genre. I wonder if Sesshomaru will manage to get control of Kagome's powers or if he'll teach her how to use his.
person szaugglaughs
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I was laughing my ass off. I'll admit, the 'who's who' during pronouns and names was a bit distracting at times. I think because sometimes sessh/kag would be referred to by their body's name, and sometimes it seemed like they were referred to by the proper pronoun, but I thought sometimes they were referred to by their true name and sometimes by their body's pronoun....but I was getting confused sometimes too, so maybe not and I'm just misremembering in my memory.

However, for myself, starting to call them by their body's name would work well, i think, because you did such a great job of capturing their 'voice.' Even when I was confused for a moment, as soon as they 'thought' or 'spoke,' your portrayal of them was so clear that I could figure out who was who instantly.

I am enjoying the heck out of this scenario, really looking forward to finding out what happens. Can't wait!
person the angel you desire
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it i love it i love it!!!! please please please update soon!
person swtdrm01
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had me laughing so hard my sides hurt. I loved it! Please update soon. That was great.
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so funny
person Lissa
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I loved that! What a shocker to the group. I so cannot wait to read the next chapter. Please, please, please update soon. I wonder how they will get out of this one. And what Sesshomaru will do to Koga once he is back into his own body.

hehehe. This will be good.

Why did they swap bodies in the first place?
person C'Asia
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon this story
It too funny and it gets better
So it reallt getting intresting so
update soon
person Dee Nekura
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon, this is uber funny and cute. ^_^
person Anime lady PIMP
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Nice cover up ,Kagz.
person lala_land
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so funnnnn nnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyy sesshomaru in kagomes bpody