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for Sango`s cristmas gift!

by Bouken

person Thornwitch
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your terrible spelling and lack of grammar make my head hurt. There's this feeature on computers; it's called "Spell Check".
person Ashati
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats was a sweet story i loved it
person caliha
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ayaaa for the love of goodness, GET SOMEONE TO REVISE THIS FOR YOU!!!! i'm guessing by the use of 'wearded' instead of wore, that English is not your first language.

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