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for Come together (its a working title

by jes1985

schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are doing such a great job on this story and that sex was great. not too much detail not too much lack of detal
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
actually, it's not bad. there is some word confusion but.. it's not bad.

continue.
person InuYoukai
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story. This is getting good!
person Christina
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon cause it good
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful. Please continue.
person XxSangoxX NSI
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
despite the errors, this second chapter was pretty ... touching
Please continue!