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Oh..Um...AH...HOLY SHIT!!!!

First that bit with Miroku and Sesshoumaru, Man, talk about HOT!!!! Then the battle, that I had to read twice because you put so many seemingly extra details into it!!! And now, Are you telling us that Sesshoumaru is Inuyasha's Daddy?????!!!!!! U just keep throwing the twists out and keeping us guessing!!! And How come Tensaiga is now fused with the Jewel?!!? Did I read that right?...Yeah that's what you said. Doesn't Kagome have to keep it pure?

I really just have to say that I am stunned! Pleasantly, of course! But stunned! You have kept me guessing and I can not wait until you update this!!!!!!

Wow! I still am just floored. Holy shit!!!

Wow.


Are you sure this is your first?

MORE MORE MORE PLEAAAASE!!!!!!! Must know how this ends!

Great story. Poor Sessy! Sesshomaru and Miroku forever!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is your first Fic? I am very impressed with it so far. I am very glad that you handled the rape scene with as much tact as you have. It could have been a very poorly done scene. You have given us enough detail to know what happened and allowed our own imaginations to fill in the nasty particulars.

I would not worry about Sesshoumaru being out of character. After all, anything outside of what he did in the original is out of character for him. You have handled him very well and I can not wait to see what happens next. Your insight into the characters reasons for what they do is most impressive and I am so interested in where you take this!!!!!!

Sesshoumaru was so cute with Inuyasha as a baby! They are so cute together!!! Will we get to see more of them together before Touga took Sesshoumaru's memory? I hope so!!

Please remember to take your time updating as I would much rather wait a little longer and not see silly typing mistakes near the end. I know how easy it is to get tired of typing and just do it to get in done.

Keep up the good work!!!!!!

Nice story; please, update. I want to more what happens, please.

you're doing well for this being your first fic. ^-^ I can see where this would be difficult, writing about what the humans did to Sesshomaru. It'll be interesting to see how you show his father dealing with the cretins next chapter.

Awsome! The polt thickens!
Poor Sesshomeru! I hope Inuyasha can help him.
This is a great new chapter! Keep it up! ^_^
Not too much ooc-ness either great!
I know it is really hard to Write Sesshomerus Char.
I tried once.. I'll NEVER do that again!
But then again, I never could write, no matter how good the story in my head seemed!
LMAO!

Please update soon as you get your next chance! =D

Thanks SO much ^.~

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So, next couple chapters will be more repressed memories? This is definitely turning interesting.

I like the beginning. I'm curious to see what memories were brought to the surface.

oh please let ther be more