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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods, how can you leave us hanging like this? GAHHHHHH!!!!! I hate cliffies!
*grins* I love this story. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now, things just get hectic and it's easy to forget. This is a great story and you're doing great. To be honest, it'd be awesome to see if Kagome and InuYasha can get away with the 'mating' if Sessy and Miroku make it. Nice pairing, btw. You don't see it too often.
*grins* I love this story. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now, things just get hectic and it's easy to forget. This is a great story and you're doing great. To be honest, it'd be awesome to see if Kagome and InuYasha can get away with the 'mating' if Sessy and Miroku make it. Nice pairing, btw. You don't see it too often.
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, My That is so cruel!!!!!! You can't just leave us with that!!! That is so mean!
Man, They are so hot together! How is Miroku going to survive? Tensaiga? or what?
It is very nice to see the emotions behind Sesshoumaru's mask and how he is dealing with this. Although I must say that it bugs me that you have all the characters hiding the issue of the true mates and the danger of it from Miroku. Sesshoumaru should explain it all to Miroku and not hide things. That hiding things crap is worse than anything the fates have in store for them, but I guess that is my past haunting me more so than the story. I like the where you have taken this and the fact that the world will not let them get away from each other.
Keep up the good writing and update soon!!!
Very hot lemon by the way!!!! I love the image of a fully clothed Sesshoumaru pinning a naked Miroku to the door!! How delicious!!!
Man, They are so hot together! How is Miroku going to survive? Tensaiga? or what?
It is very nice to see the emotions behind Sesshoumaru's mask and how he is dealing with this. Although I must say that it bugs me that you have all the characters hiding the issue of the true mates and the danger of it from Miroku. Sesshoumaru should explain it all to Miroku and not hide things. That hiding things crap is worse than anything the fates have in store for them, but I guess that is my past haunting me more so than the story. I like the where you have taken this and the fact that the world will not let them get away from each other.
Keep up the good writing and update soon!!!
Very hot lemon by the way!!!! I love the image of a fully clothed Sesshoumaru pinning a naked Miroku to the door!! How delicious!!!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wheeee, you reviewed my story!! I am so flattered you like that sucker, because I just LOVE this story. So good. I am going crazy here. hmmm, familiar smile, so that means they probably know the demon, but I have no clue who it could be. I'm probably going to be smacking myself in the head for not knowing when we find out!
Okay, the one neg: Miroku dancing with the guy. I havne't gone back to re-read it (although I'm sure I will!), but on first pass the reasons given for him going out on the dance floor didn't totally work for my brain. I honestly couldn't say exactly why, it just...rang off a little. But every other part of that scene really worked for me. The description was nice, Miroku eating off his plate cracked me up, and of course Sesshoumaru jealous is just cute and hot at the same time.
Oh, the bet was a great touch, too, especially Shippou's total cluelessness. I cannot wait for more. Literally. Death could happen. Which would be sad, because then I'd never get to finish MY story, which would make you sad so..i guess we better just both keep righting, LOL.
Oh, and re: the buddhism thing? I ended up using this sucker: http://www.jref.com/forum/archive/index.php/t-4880.html It's a forum where they were discussing this exact question, and a person who has been a monk was answering! It was really interesting, as they mentioned sects that can't marry as well...stuff I figure we could use, eh? Oh, I should say I'm not trying to say anything about the story to put this in or anything, I just love sharing the research stuff, heh. Man, I'm a geek! Geekette, maybe.
Anyway, again, I just love this story. Can't wait to see where it's goin'.
Okay, the one neg: Miroku dancing with the guy. I havne't gone back to re-read it (although I'm sure I will!), but on first pass the reasons given for him going out on the dance floor didn't totally work for my brain. I honestly couldn't say exactly why, it just...rang off a little. But every other part of that scene really worked for me. The description was nice, Miroku eating off his plate cracked me up, and of course Sesshoumaru jealous is just cute and hot at the same time.
Oh, the bet was a great touch, too, especially Shippou's total cluelessness. I cannot wait for more. Literally. Death could happen. Which would be sad, because then I'd never get to finish MY story, which would make you sad so..i guess we better just both keep righting, LOL.
Oh, and re: the buddhism thing? I ended up using this sucker: http://www.jref.com/forum/archive/index.php/t-4880.html It's a forum where they were discussing this exact question, and a person who has been a monk was answering! It was really interesting, as they mentioned sects that can't marry as well...stuff I figure we could use, eh? Oh, I should say I'm not trying to say anything about the story to put this in or anything, I just love sharing the research stuff, heh. Man, I'm a geek! Geekette, maybe.
Anyway, again, I just love this story. Can't wait to see where it's goin'.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, let's see...
OMG!!!!! How could I have not read this before! I love this story, woo hooooooo! Miroku is one of my favorites, and with Sessh this way! So sweeet and touching and hot all at the same time And you have an FMA story too! Life is good!
Ahem, okay, now that that's said, heh...I really, really enjoyed this story. I love the flow and pace of the writing. The dialogue was nicely done. Something i really like is the pace of the emotional changes. The memories, how Sesshoumaru reacts, Miroku's reaction to Sango and Sessh. both, especially when he's so 'scary' at the beginning. Nice.
I also enjoy the humor. Inuyasha's 'can I tell Jaken,' is one that stands out, but there were a lot of one liners and moments that cracked me up.
The scene with baby inuyasha with sesshoumaru was very touching and sweet, and I thought it was even more poignant when we found out it's his own baby. I got all choked up. I just...I really, really enjoyed this story, that's all I can say. I look forward to the rest of it. REALLY look forward to it.
Oh, and nice twist with the Lord Hitomi.
OMG!!!!! How could I have not read this before! I love this story, woo hooooooo! Miroku is one of my favorites, and with Sessh this way! So sweeet and touching and hot all at the same time And you have an FMA story too! Life is good!
Ahem, okay, now that that's said, heh...I really, really enjoyed this story. I love the flow and pace of the writing. The dialogue was nicely done. Something i really like is the pace of the emotional changes. The memories, how Sesshoumaru reacts, Miroku's reaction to Sango and Sessh. both, especially when he's so 'scary' at the beginning. Nice.
I also enjoy the humor. Inuyasha's 'can I tell Jaken,' is one that stands out, but there were a lot of one liners and moments that cracked me up.
The scene with baby inuyasha with sesshoumaru was very touching and sweet, and I thought it was even more poignant when we found out it's his own baby. I got all choked up. I just...I really, really enjoyed this story, that's all I can say. I look forward to the rest of it. REALLY look forward to it.
Oh, and nice twist with the Lord Hitomi.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooops, almost forgot something I wanted to say! I love your story so much, I wanted to mention one thing. Half a sentence, somewhere in the middle, when Miroku is giving up his robes. I got the impression from the sentence that he is giving them up because of his own personal convictions as a person AND because he is planning to get married. If I'm right, I figure you might like to know that in Japanese buddhist tradition, monks can actually marry. Someone pointed this out to me in a story of mine, and from what I can tell from the research I did, that seems to be true. Just thought you might like to know!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an unexpected pairing Sess & Miruko, but it was a pleasant surprise. I read all 16 chappies interesting & fun. but it the fic complete? if mot please email with updates. The story seems to have more to tell. ;)
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That isen't all is it? Come on that can't be all. I wanna see Sango get her ass kicked by a pissed off Sesshoumaru. Oh and in the last three chapters there are a few spelling and grammatical errors. And why does InuYasha call him Chichi-ue? He should be calling him Oto-San. It's a more familiar term for father. Chihi-ue means 'honorable father' so it is a formal form of address. And I like this. Will you be updateing anytime soon? Arie Date.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sweet story! I love it very original. Keep up the good work I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic.
lol. Keep it up. It really is interesting.
Perhaps the reason as to why you don't have much reviewers is because many people are lazy, or they are just a bunch of jealous people.
^_^!
Okay, maybe you just don't have much graphic sexual scenes. That's how most people who come on this site are.
Whatever, just forget them and, by all means, continue telling us your tale.
lol. Keep it up. It really is interesting.
Perhaps the reason as to why you don't have much reviewers is because many people are lazy, or they are just a bunch of jealous people.
^_^!
Okay, maybe you just don't have much graphic sexual scenes. That's how most people who come on this site are.
Whatever, just forget them and, by all means, continue telling us your tale.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sesshomaru gets pregnant again in the near future!!! I love the fact that Sess was fighting and almost killing his own son, and now, they're back together! Please hurry with the updates, I want to read more!