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Is this the end of the story? I hope not.

that was a very sweet chapter. I liked the 'watching from the sidelines' aspect, the Miroku's gonna have kids reminder (man, what i would give to see that one, heh.) and the black puppy moment. still very much enjoying this. This one actually read very smoothly, it seemed, even more so than normal. Couldn't say why, it just felt that way.

Oh, and I thought how you described Miroku's change to youkai was nicely done.

again great chapter. its about time sesshy and inu had a father/son...i mean mother/son...oh well you know what i'm trying to say, they had a nice moment of bonding. and miroku can transform how cute is that and now inu can too. XD cant wait for you to update so make it quick. lol

all i hav to say is awwww u turned miroku into a hanyou. that is so cute now sesshy can play with his puppy ears all night long XD. now inu has a complete family and so does sesshy and miroku that is just beautiful. cant wait to read more so update soon : D

lovely. I like the visual of the mark, and...a very fluffy, aaaawww chapter, which i so needed right now, so thanks!!

Oh! I just love the image of Miroku with dark furry ears!! I really love this chapter and can't wait to see how Miroku is going to deal with his new attributes!! Will Inuyasha and Kagome try and become mates now that it worked out for Sesshoumaru and Miroku? I can't wait to see!! I really like the mating marks you gave them. I like the fact that they cover their entire backs. Keep Writing!! And updating!!

Oh, by the way, I understand now why Sesshoumaru kept the secret from Miroku!! I should have trusted your vision for the story. I will from now on!!

Two sets of cute ears!! Joy!

aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww this chapter was so kawaii. i luvd reading every word and detail. i do hope seeshy conceives even though he is a lord it would make miroku so happy XD. im glad u updated and cant wait to read more.

WOW, that was really hot miruco & sessy finally mated. you big meany! you stopped at a cliffy [me pouts]. soul mates eh? i think miruco knows, he is following his instints like sessy. so much for them taking it slow, ha ha. i wouldn't mind you hurrying them along a little faster. i think the mating bite will strenghten them both & only works for certain mates, eh? so this proves inuyasha & kagome can exchange the mating marks without consquences too? send an email when u update.

I found your story through an A/N from szaugglaughs and I'm glad I read it. This is an excellent story, and I've never seen anything quite like it. Great plot, great writing, and I've thoroughly enjoyed what you've done so far.

Eeek, you killin' me here! Nicely written, liked the lemon. Nice scene, woo hoo! I'll just be quietly dying over here while I wait for the next chapter. It's so unfair, 'I' get to write cliff hangers, but no one else gets to, isn't that the rule? ;-)