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schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD luvd the chapter. hahahahaha kouga's mated to inuyasha's daughter i cant wait to see how the family gatherings will be like. cant wait for the next chapter and good luck wit the play
person fuuha
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! What I really wander is if Yasashiku is Kagome and Inuyasha's son? He is a demi-god after all.
person nette
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm luvin the plot twist :) i mean i didnt even see dat coming and i usually pick up on things lik that. u really had me "slackjawed" if u don't mind me stealing ur word for the moment. i mean wow XD. can't wait for the next update to see if sesshy will be saved. XD
person luvsjazz
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh, I see. Thus the desire to not kill Sesshy's baby.
So full of suspense...........update again soon!
person nette
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter and can i hav ur permission to hurt katsuro really badyl...i promise he will be in tip-top shape come next chapter. no.....ok then....XD. i just hope he gets his just dessert soon. i cant wait to find out wat happens next. sesshy and miroku not mated in the future...not good man not good. hope miroku can fix this lil problem soon. XD
person luvsjazz
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So who's the demi-god kid? Is it Inuyasha and Kagome's? Since I don't know of any other goddesses in the story - unless I've forgotten someone. Seems to me that Katsuro (is that his name?) doesn't really have anything personally against Sesshomaru, just that he's tied to tradition. He doesn't seem like he wants to embarrass him or cause him pain, but that being the case, I wouldn't think he'd leave him in the care of a pimp.....lol. Man, don't you just hate nosy family? Being that he's such a stickler for tradition, I can see where he would overlook inuyasha, since he's married to a goddess, but what would his hesitation be in not getting rid of Sesshy's current pup? Being that Miroku is a hanyu, I can't see where this kid would bring any power or strength to the clan, since I don't see that the possibility of it having spiritual powers would be a big plus.

person DrawFire
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya, I was just wondering if you could see all of chapter 4... I can't read the actual chapter; it doesn't turn up! Anyway, just thought I'd let you know.
person Liquorish
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I HOPE KATSURO DIES A HORRIBLE, HORRIBLE DEATH, AND SOON!!!!!!! I am going to sentimental for a moment, (so out of character for me. AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!) and say I hope Sesshoumaru and the baby end up ok. I love this story, it's one of my favorites! Keep updating. Re-iterating, I hope Katsuro DIES SOON and VERY PAINFULLY!!!!!
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope someone rescues poor Sesshy soon-- and his baby. Hes a bit ooc here but it makes for am even better read.
person nette
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg can i kill katsuro now...please please i will be ur best friend XD. no but seriously luvd this chapter though...*sniffles* poor sesshy nothing seems to go right for our demon lord. i wonder how miroku will act when he finds out wat happened to his mate and wat inu will do...cant wait for the update so hurryyyy XD