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by nomdeplume

schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The poor monk is having a "hard" time of things now.... Poor Miroku
person Sandy
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, well I just read all this story, and in my country is midnigth but I can't go to bed without tell you that this was the best story Mpreg that I have read of Inuyasha. It was so good that Sesshoumaru was Inuyasha's father.
All the emotions, the love and the situations were so real that I was close to tear when Seshy was remembering.

Do you have more stories like this (Seshy being Inuyasha's dad) or do you know where can I find them??

Bye...Great story.
person Afrieal
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... oh friggin wow and we thought you did good with the FMA fics thank you for writing it


affie and rysha
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sweet.
I really liked this I never thought of the main pairing as a pair, but you really pulled it off. I loved all the details they just make the story.
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwe!!!!! that was a good story! i really liked it! i hate to see it end, but ah you ended it well though! i am definately going to check out any other stories you have written, i liked this one so much afterall! well.. tata! I enjoyed the read!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should definately continue this from the epilogue... and go on to tell about how they came to be where the last chapter left them.... yah know the day after miroku's daring time traveling and dangerous encounters of the pregnant whip-weilding kind! lol anyways!! ahem... yeah.. you should continue it! :-D
person bears24
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for this story. I enjoy your stories immensely (I'll try to stick to discussing just Unbound Memories here and be sure to gush over Worlds Collide in the review sections for that story later). Before I can go on and on about how much I like this story, however, I do think that I need to say that I think you need one more chapter. The story began with the bond between Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru and I think it's only fair that we end there as well. Ending the story in the future made me feel a little disconnected. I felt we left the past Inuyasha and co. too quickly and I was more curious as to what was happening there than I was about Yasashiku and his child. I think that last chapter was absolutely necessary, but having the last chapter back in the past would really bring the story full circle.
person bears24
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you thank you!
person Raeshi
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just finished reading your story. I really liked it. Love Sess and Miroku, they make such a good pairing.
person Touchmysoul
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful!

I love the ending.

Though....I did I have my hopes up for a pregant Miroku. I love when Miroku is the uke.

But like the old saying 'Beggars can't be choosers'

~Touchmysoul~