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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its a great story and i was interested but i need to tell you that you need to change some things because it reads as tho a eleven year old is writing this, it needs to be more mature and more details and needs to flow a bit. Other than that, it is GREAT!!! Keep going really, you could do so much with your talent, don't be afraid to show it
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it please keep writing it is so awsome i wish you would write some more because its like a sereies that stops in the middle with nothing complete you are a very talented writer in my book anyways i hope you keep writing this story
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TELL ME THAT YOU AREN:T SERIOUS!!
this is terrible.
this is terrible.
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really thought you wrote this as some sort of joke...
This is really badly written.
It was a joke right?
This is really badly written.
It was a joke right?
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey ^_^
Nice story, Inu was a beet OOC, but besides that I find the stery really good. Great Job.
Peace & Love >-<
Nice story, Inu was a beet OOC, but besides that I find the stery really good. Great Job.
Peace & Love >-<
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, its me again... Cant wait till next chappy, story really good so far ^.^ Please Update Soon >-<
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Story. Update.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update