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for One and the Same

by SarahD

person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
son of a whore... that was a huge cliffhanger u left us on >=(...
person alatera
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1st chapter

“Jezz, Higurashi. Watch where you are going!”

“Natalie! That was rude!” Cody narrowed his eyes at Natalie, and moved to pick up Kagome’s fallen things.

Kagome took a step back a bit surprised at his kind gesture, and "Yumi "gasped holding her hands to her heart. Natalie gritted her teeth and pulled at Cody’s arm in attempt to bring him from the ground and Kagome’s things.

And

“Sorry about that, Kagome. Oh, and "Yumi", you hair looks hot today. Well see ya later.”

Great job with story !
person lost child
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it may have been short, but it was good. I can't wait to read more
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
to tease is a cruelty... but it assures the reader that there are good things to wait for.

thank you,
ginny
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update this is so interesting and good!!! >.<
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what had happned i am so interested please write more!!!!
person kiera
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who gives a Fuck about taco bell!! This Fanfiction needs the most attetion!!! Hurry up and wirte some more!!
hahahahahaha just kidding. i like it so far keep it up
person Lissa
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think you know what I am going to ask for. It's killing me now. Does she go back and what is going to happen to her. She was so surprised that he was showing his emotions and concern.

ARGHHHHHH!!!! Why, oh why did you stop there? Now it is bothering me.

Ok. I understand being busy. Congrats on the promotion. You must be doing a good job and that is a good thing. Keep up the good work.

(PS: It is urge not erg.)

Really good story. Will keep an eye out for an update.
person Slightlt_Sinful
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By any chance, are you writting the same story on FF, because I believe ive seen this before,if you are then great.....either one you update on i'll be able to see, I have the other one on alert. Keep up the good work
person Slightly_Sinful
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK now I'm confused....I cant seem to find it sooo maybe its my imagination....lol silly me.....update soon K