rate_review Reviews

This was an interesting story that involves a completely different characterization for Sesshomaru and the rest. I'll definitely be looking for your next chapter.

Also, that was a very well spoken (written) response to your flamer. Kudos. I can't stand seeing those when looking through reviews for stories. (I, thankfully, have no personal experience as of yet with those. Laughs and knocks on wood for the good fortune to continue.)

Other than a few grammatical and word misuse/spelling errors, this story is very good.

Take care.

lol.. oh my god, I LOVE YOU. I hate flames, if people don't like then stop readying it. Thats what I have to say. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I want to know if having Kagome around will change his look in life. Will he toughen up? or Will his little half brother keep picking on him. Let me know when you update please.

Critisem:
So far everything is going right with the spelling and how the story flows. Now I not use to Sesshomaru being a pussy, but it is something new and after a while you just get tied of the high and mighty Sesshomaru. I truly have to say its good. Keep up the good work.

i like the story so far and i can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see if sess get out of the bulling by them guys. and kegome become his friend. good luck and be waitting for more of the story.

Awe I am very sorry for the flamer don't pay attention to them your story is AWESOME hurry and get to a 100% :) please and thank you with a long chappy I call them chappy short for chapter lol in case you're wondering well looking forward into your update I'll be back with an AWESOME review for a AWESOME STORY :) well any ways ttyl.

That what a very well worded response to a flame. I personally hate when people flame stories just because they diagree with what was written. I am just telling you, that i like your story, and the way that you are portraying shessomaru. I have never read a story where he was shown in such a way. Keep going, i cant wait for the next chapter. P.S. sorry but my spelling and grammer kinda suck...

Ok that was harsh and your grammar does need correcting, but I like seeing sesshy as the underdog for once, you need more description, I had a hard time 'seeing' the whole thing, but It is a good piece of work. Let me know if you need someone to beta, I'd be happy to just to assure the story flows well in grammar wise.

Yours

Holly

Wow I mean I'll be damned if you don't update soon....

I love everything about your story wow litterarly I'd give you a hundred stars out of a hundred....

PWEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE!!!!!

SCREW THE GRAMMAR WE CAN UNDERSTAND IT!!!! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN WOW I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!

MY NEXT FAVROITE NO TOP STORIES ON MY FAVE LIST!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!

Wow...never thought I would see Sesshomaru like this. I think you should make it to where Kagome and Seshomaru become friends and when she gets work of what Inuyasha, Miroku, and Kouga were doing to him, she breaks up with Miroku. That would show em. Anyways, great start to this story. I'm definitly going to be an avid reader.

that was good you have to work on some stuff like grammer but other then that it was really good