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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good lord this is a gorgeous bit of writing. You paint beautiful images with your words. Please, please turn this into a lemon!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow...
But I'll say more. I utterly enjoyed this. Simply wonderful and refreshing, how Sesshoumaru reminices on past memories. I can't wait to read more. It's nice to see a decent story with Sess/Rin. It's hard to find. I'm sitting here listening to a song (The Chairman's Waltz) from Memoirs of a Geisha and it just fits your story so well. Makes me want to read it again. Haha
I do hope you finish the lime you started. What a teaser, hehe =3. Keep up the good work.
But I'll say more. I utterly enjoyed this. Simply wonderful and refreshing, how Sesshoumaru reminices on past memories. I can't wait to read more. It's nice to see a decent story with Sess/Rin. It's hard to find. I'm sitting here listening to a song (The Chairman's Waltz) from Memoirs of a Geisha and it just fits your story so well. Makes me want to read it again. Haha
I do hope you finish the lime you started. What a teaser, hehe =3. Keep up the good work.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I am enjoying where this story is progressing, I feel like the chapters could be a bit longer and more like complete thoughts, more than glances at a whole. It breaks the cadance of the story and makes it slightly frustrating to read.
Though, I do enjoy your writing and the subdued, almost haunted feeling this is entertaining. Perhaps this will be a better read once it is finished and I can read it strait through.
Though, I do enjoy your writing and the subdued, almost haunted feeling this is entertaining. Perhaps this will be a better read once it is finished and I can read it strait through.
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very nice.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww...I really want to find out what happens next. this chapter was beautifully written and I enjoyed it immensely, I'll keep an eye out for you in the future ^-^
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really good. I'm wondering if this is like a flashback of some sort. In chapter 1 she was already dead. I'm probably not processing this right, but I do love the story so far.
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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely amazing. I love the way you described everything, especailly Sesshoumaru's emotions. This tale was sad but sweet and I hope to read more of your writing. Keep the excellent working coming.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the beginning....I can wait to read how Rin die....Was it old age or did something kill her??????...update soon....
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was deep, sad, and bittersweet ^_^ love it. wil there be more?
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like the elegant flow of your words. Very mature and full of emotion.