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Great chapter. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!!!

this is pretty good. i damn well cracked up when sesshomaru said "well fuck". i'm definitely looking foward to reading more of this. so until next time, ja!

Lovely start you have here :) Can't wait to read more

Wow, this is really awsome!
Great idea! Please keep up the good work, and update when you can.
I think this will be a great Fanfic, even if the Chars are a little OOC.
Thats okay, I mean after all they can do some of the things we read in the show.
^_~ ~Hint-Hint~ lmao!

Well great great story!
Please keep it up, I'll be here to the very end! Promise!!

(Forgive crappy spelling, cant type/spell to save my life @.@)

--Storm

Oh, I like very much. Your Inuyasha is just perfect and I like your Sesshoumaru, too. Someone else said they'd never heard Sesshoumaru swear but that's just because my favorite daiyoukai's mouth doesn't translate well into English. He actually swears almost as bad as Inuyasha, it's just different. The way you're doing it is a good representation of that. I'll definately be keeping an eye out for this.

~Silence~

Ummmmm, I thought I had reviewed this story... did you have to repost? In any event, great job! You gotta update! I want some smex damnit! lmao. This is a great concept amongst the other two or three I've read with the same idea. I like yours way better! YAY!

You know... for this to be your first fic you have done an excellent job. Although I don't picture Sesshoumaru cursing up a storm even in his head, but it fits well. Try not to over use it as it will take away from his personality.


You're off to a good start, and I would love to see more. Oh, you do have a few typos but that is easily corrected.
The most common one that I saw repeated was: Minute [min-it] as in hour, minute, second. Minute [mahy-noot] as in of minor importance; insignificant; trifling... Both are spelled the same but are pronounced differently.

Hope that this helps.

Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

I like this story so far its well writen and is humorus. I look forward to finding out if Sesshomoru has Tetsiga or if Inuyash lost it in his struggle with the 3 dead demons

I've read this fic @ FFN, and I that It's one of the best. But tell me, who is going to be pregnant in this fic.And can't wait for the next chappie to come out.

Please, please write more.
I just love Inujasha!!!