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OOOO whats with the back room? And how wiil InuYash react to hi beads being taken off, all these answered and more next time on shadowed nights

Great story, great Inujasha. Please update soon!!!

interesting start to a fic.
i do have one tiny however, and how does sess get inu to agree to such a preposterous proposal
is not very strong.

i do intend to re-read both chapters. i figure i could have missed it.
the first night was clear, but subsequent nights? which is why i need to re-read the entire thing again
slowly.

however, it is very interesting, and you have me looking forward to the next chapters.
it might be me who cant see the strong connection (too many sleepless nights at my end...)
anyway, i hope you find the time to enlighten me - but not at the expense of not writing the chapter
i can wait for the story to unfold.

I LOVE THAT RAT!!!!!!!!!!! Please keep him coming back.

this is actually turning quite funny. One suggestion I have, is that when you copy/paste for upload, try and actually separate the chapters. I don't care, myself, but it may make it easier all around for some.

I'm glad to see an update on this, happy to know that you're continuing it. This is really turning out to be very cute. So many of the small details are so good. And I love the characterizations. Thanx so much for sharing,

~Silence~

YAY! Inuyasha's such a doofus. The beads are connected to his youki and when he's human they come off! XXD

I loved this part:
“Where the fuck is he?”

Inuyasha had absolutely no idea that at that very moment just a half mile away, the very subject that was missing was asking his very question.

“Where the fuck am I?”

And this part:
“Oh, you are so dead.” (when talking to the rat) LMFAO!!!

Ooo and this part:
Sesshoumaru had not expected to see Inuyasha waiting for him at the cave entrance earlier and had been fully prepared to raid the little human village to drag the hanyou by the scruff of his very neck.

And this part!
He could feel the urge to kill anything that moved rising and hoped in the back of his mind that the rat would suddenly dart out in front of him.

And of course this part:
With in moments, the change was complete and there they were.
A simple Ningen and an Inu Yokai.
…And one rat that was very happy that he, at least, remained a rat.
I also love how, whether it was intentional or not, that the rat helped Sesshomaru find the cave. ^_^ That was cute!

You are so amusing, please continue!! ^o^

I have cracked up so badly...u have no idea. That was hilarious. Keep up the good work. I will faithfully wait for the post. ^_^

BRILLIANT!!!

Alright. Okay. I don't know if you were tryin' for it but...that was TOO cute! :-)