rate_review Reviews

OMG! That was so sad! Great Story though!

hmm. i think it's touching, in a dark way, but nevertheless; you have a man who is aware of his actions and how much pain he is inflicting on the one he loves...so much in fact that he's begging her to leave, and a girl who is trying to cling onto love for the sake. something told me not even a few lines in that the only way she was perminantly leaving him was when he killed himself, but still, the ending was just as emotional as the revelation. i think you could make this a little longer in the intro; it's kind of pushed to the end, but i can understand why. dark is never fun to concentrate on. i do have a question; why didn't inuYasha leave when he realized what he was doing to her? that's the only part that takes away from his character. it's well and good that he knows he was hurting her, but he's just as much at fault as she is. hmm. anyway...i like it. you wrote it well, you got a lot of gut wrenching, stomach turning realities pressed together in the mix. well done.

o.o wow...sad....poor things

Good Good, Good Good. My way of saying it was really good

i dont see how its inu/kag if he kills himself...=/ yea they love each other, but still, it implies that she will end up with someone else...it has a good plot, it is au, but thats obvious, its very well written. i like it.

This was so sad. It was a well written and thought out story, though. I hope that you keep writing. I would like to see you writing more stories.

This story seems finished. A sad story, but still very good.

awwe, where did this idea come from?
it was cute, and i was PLEASED to no end to see that there were little if ANY spelling or grammar mistakes. I only hope to read a really good HAPPY story of inu/kag.

I'm a tad bias towards them. I'm one to stick mainly to the traditional pairings after all.

Thanks for sharing this. Continue with the writing.

Kudasai.
Heather.

that was really sad but i likey

OOOHHHH MY GOD that was way too sad :(wipe tears away) but still a good well writen story... ☻

YOU ROCK ☻☻☻

Wow!