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for The Christmas Card

by tsikinoodango

schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please Please Please write another card story!!! i liked the birthday card alot, Kagome having to follow the clues and such....and i liked this one for the sneaking away from her guards...and for the treats to make the guard sleep on the sidewalk.
person natts
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wonderin' if this story takes place in the past of in the future. Thanks
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post ur fanfics on fanfiction.net or destinysgateway.com so that readers may know when there is an update
or email me if u hav an update.
person Bunny
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This made my eyes bleed. You have a good plot but your writing is horrible. You used incorrect words barely any punctuation. This was sooooo hard to read. I actually have a headache now. If you rewrote this and had someone who knows how to write look over this you may just have a winner. Also it moved so fast there was no time for anything. A person just can't follow this.
person angel
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was awsome i lvoe it and i cant wait in till the next one .. later for now

angel
person kAWAII kILALA
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The end seemed a tad bit rushed...but over all? Very good...
Hopefully there will be another sequel, but this time More Lemons!
The part with her makeing a callor, and leash on him, and yelled that he was the cause of her pain, was GENIOUS!
I totaly loved it!!!:-P
TTYL;
megan
person princess.jenn
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this story is supper funny.
poor shesshy and his pickles...
please update as soon as u can, i really want to know what happens next. and i also want to know what inu's plan is .
hope u had a merry christmas,
Princess Jenn
person Kawaii Kilala
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy season to you too! :D Enjoy your christmas, amd happy one too!
Please make the next chapter soon, and post it too!
Please, as a christmas presant for us, your readers!
Please!
TTYL;
megan
person bluemoon_175
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad to see this story go, I would love to read more. So I hope you make a sequel, and to keep up the good work.
person lala_land
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhh she finally having the god dam pups!!!!

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