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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
saw this entire story elsewhere... and found it excellent
hope you write more...
I think Sess is slightly weaker, but his character is not too far off
works for the story, which is the main thing
i'm not sure i like what you did with his eyes
because i thought their golden eyes were perfect for them
when you used tarnished, it made me reflect
but i'm sure you had your reasons for the physical changes you made
but ... it brought pictures of gladiator to my mind
not crowe though...
hope you write more...
I think Sess is slightly weaker, but his character is not too far off
works for the story, which is the main thing
i'm not sure i like what you did with his eyes
because i thought their golden eyes were perfect for them
when you used tarnished, it made me reflect
but i'm sure you had your reasons for the physical changes you made
but ... it brought pictures of gladiator to my mind
not crowe though...
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You could use a bit of betaing, otherwise it's good. I'm interested in figuring out where this is going. >D
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You're FINALLY posting this HERE?!! I'm SO excited for you! This is seriously the BEST Sesshomaru uke fic in the world. I mean seriously, people think ukes are whimpering babies who have no control over sexual situations or anything else; that's not true! They actually have TONS of control and... I'm getting off the topic.
ANYWAY! I'm SO happy this is here! I get to read it all over again! Hooray for you!
-DM
ANYWAY! I'm SO happy this is here! I get to read it all over again! Hooray for you!
-DM
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
COOL! Had NO idea you hadn't posted this here. It's a wonderful story, and I'm sure readers here who've not had a chance to read it yet, will really enjoy it!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sounds interesting
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww! You posted this one here too! Great! I have been waiting time when you will post your stories in aff.net. :P
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your fan fictions, but I was wondering are this the exact same ones you have posted on fanfiction.net
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a truly AWESOME start! I can't wait for the new chapter!~ B reading U!!